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Veena

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by muggs, Feb 2, 2018.

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  1. Feb 21, 2018 #71
    creativemumma

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    Love the ending!

    Very mature thought process

    Keep writing more:thumbsup:
     
    creativemumma, Feb 21, 2018
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  2. Feb 21, 2018 #72
    nandinimithun

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    Beautiful story, well narrated.... Loved the matured ending
     
    nandinimithun, Feb 21, 2018
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  3. Feb 21, 2018 #73
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    Awesome & soothing end. Keep writing.
     
    ratan, Feb 21, 2018
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  4. Feb 22, 2018 #74
    muggs

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    Thanks for reading :) I will try to continue :icon_writing:
     
    muggs, Feb 22, 2018
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  5. Feb 22, 2018 #75
    muggs

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    Thanks for liking it :blush:
     
    muggs, Feb 22, 2018
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  6. Feb 22, 2018 #76
    muggs

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    Thank you for your feedbacks throughout the story :banana:
     
    muggs, Feb 22, 2018
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  7. Feb 26, 2018 #77
    Vandhuamma

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    Beautiful ending... Wonderful story....
    I could imagine seeing Veena sitting with the card :cry::cry::cry: with tears of joy.
     
    Vandhuamma, Feb 26, 2018
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  8. Feb 26, 2018 #78
    muggs

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    Thanks for your comment :)
     
    muggs, Feb 26, 2018
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  9. Feb 26, 2018 #79
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    Awesome Ending !! Loved it.
     
    peddadas, Feb 26, 2018
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  10. Feb 27, 2018 #80
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    Very good narration and the ending is beautiful
     
    Deepika23, Feb 27, 2018
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