Maggar Singh, My Saviour

nandinimithun · Jan 15, 2018

Geets,
Makara sankranthi shubashayagalu....
Waiting to read more of your work, keep writing....

GeetaKashyap · Jan 15, 2018

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"I see that we have a power in our hand which many have not used, ie., raising male and female children as equals and raising sensitive humans. I feel if this is implemented, at least in the near future we will have men and women treating each other as equals and with respect. Then at least some balance may be achieved"
I totally agree with this statement of yours. This is one of the best approach which we actually have to implement. I always encourage my writer friends to share messages which would bring remarkable change. 100% not all would agree to our views but at least there will be 0.00001% of the crowd to support and try to implement what is possible from their end. I know we readers look for entertainment but I certainly say entertainment along with message would reach the mass as yours. Thanks Geeta.
Shankranthi Habbadha Subashyagalu.
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Thank you so much, dear@Adharv. In this story through Maggar I shared some food for thought and I did so to avoid sounding preachy.

Personally I feel there is a lesson in anything and everything we see or hear and it is up to us to pick it up consciously or unconsciously. Strangely our minds are such that any negative message is picked up even when it is hidden and positive messages are ignored even when they are presented in bold letters! They say some bad messages hidden in the lyrics of some pop music are picked up by teens which the older generation misses! Does that mean we pick up what suits us and ignore the rest? Must be. To give an example, whenever I saw romantic songs where the lovers pine for each other etc, it made not much sense to me. But a friend who was in a long distance relationship said, these emotions are very real and touches the hearts of such lovers!!!

Nimagu Sankranti habbada shubhashayagalu.

GeetaKashyap · Jan 15, 2018

nandinimithun said: ↑

Geets,
Makara sankranthi shubashayagalu....
Waiting to read more of your work, keep writing....
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Thank you and wish you the same, dear Nandu @nandinimithun.

Adharv · Jan 15, 2018

Hey I totally agree with your point Geeta. That's the fun fact too.

GeetaKashyap · Jan 15, 2018

Adharv said: ↑

Hey I totally agree with your point Geeta. That's the fun fact too.
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Thank you, dear@Adharv.

Archanaanchan · Jan 16, 2018

Geets,

I am late only to write here but not to read wonderful 6 episode that you have written . This topic that you have touched is a topic in discussion for few generations .

I basically loved your thought process here . It was more realistic to me through characters. Gender stereotype is still existent. But definitely beats the past numbers in the present and gradually we will see it more declining.We see women and men equally engaged in financial roles and many major responsibilities . The newer generations are changing .

Lets hope there is a better respect and understanding for women going further .
The best part in your story was discussing a women's problem and finding the solution through men. 10 on 10 Geeta !!

I am anticipating to see more such writings from you on this platform.

GeetaKashyap · Jan 16, 2018

Archanaanchan said: ↑

Geets,

I am late only to write here but not to read wonderful 6 episode that you have written . This topic that you have touched is a topic in discussion for few generations .

I basically loved your thought process here . It was more realistic to me through characters. Gender stereotype is still existent. But definitely beats the past numbers in the present and gradually we will see it more declining.We see women and men equally engaged in financial roles and many major responsibilities . The newer generations are changing .

Lets hope there is a better respect and understanding for women going further .
The best part in your story was discussing a women's problem and finding the solution through men. 10 on 10 Geeta !!

I am anticipating to see more such writings from you on this platform.
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Thank you, Archu, for your appreciation and views. All I can say is, Amen.

HazelPup · Jan 17, 2018

Hi Geetha madam
I waited to read all episodes in one go. There’s a tamil story in this site which I read recently had something similar. The character in the story materializes in real time. But you have gone one step ahead in making that character talk about social / moral responsibilities of every individual and women’s issues. I too have wondered why should the creator of any story make their characters so violent ... (many movies). Is it their inner demons manifesting through the characters they created. Enjoyed reading your story. You are an amazing all-rounder. Congrats

GeetaKashyap · Jan 17, 2018

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Hi Geetha madam
I waited to read all episodes in one go. There’s a tamil story in this site which I read recently had something similar. The character in the story materializes in real time. But you have gone one step ahead in making that character talk about social / moral responsibilities of every individual and women’s issues. I too have wondered why should the creator of any story make their characters so violent ... (many movies). Is it their inner demons manifesting through the characters they created. Enjoyed reading your story. You are an amazing all-rounder. Congrats

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@HazelPup

Thanks a lot for your appreciation and for making my day.

"I too have wondered why should the creator of any story make their characters so violent ... (many movies). Is it their inner demons manifesting through the characters they created." I do believe in this as every time we imagine the plot, character and the dialogue etc, unless we invest and think, go through the entire emotion, (I guess even the police or the investigators go through this process to track the criminal.) it will be impossible to bring the drama to life. So this made me come with that dialogue in the story.

Thanks again, dear, for the feedback.

Sandycandy · Jan 20, 2018

Geeta ! Finally read this (with a bag of chips ).
Crisp writing with a nice touch of humor and a strong underlying message ! You are awesome ! We should have a Geeta fan club, I will be the president !

Look forward to more sketches, stories and recipes !!!

P.S dhanush as maggar Singh was a super idea!