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The Silence , Is It Real ?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Purple2017, May 29, 2017.

  1. Purple2017

    Purple2017 Silver IL'ite

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    Yesterday when
    you avoided eye contact with me
    I was not scared
    for I knew
    it was an acknowledgement of my presence
    I could perceive
    your mind obsessed with my thoughts
    was it shyness...
    or
    a stand-off against me!
    was it a trick to avoid publicity...
    or to smile in isolation! !
    may be you were a complex equation
    whose roots I could not determine
    let your complexity
    usher the evergreen LOVE
    in me! ! !
     
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  2. Anjelin

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    Nicely written! Love it.
     
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  3. Purple2017

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    Thank you, Anjelin for your appreciation...
     
  4. Purple2017

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    up's and down's are applicable to anything....can 'love' be an exception to that ? Against this backdrop, my poem
    has been composed......yes, the long term goal is 'love'...but the path is zigzag...
     
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    Reminded me of meeting another daily commuter in a train, who'd never make an eye contact, even though our hips were touching. Jane Austen observes:
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    Thank you Pooja for your inspiring comments....
     
  8. Purple2017

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    Nonya, your opinion may not be incorrect.......see all these can happen in youth......whatever you can tell...a fantasy....turning into a dream...and then to sleep.....I just have captured this in some words of my own.....this passion may be the story for novels..or films also........but let us admit that this is quite natural and just enjoy and forget.....
     
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    so beautifully written.
     
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    Thank you for your nice comments..
     

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