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  1. Oct 28, 2016 #1
    PoojaShah

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    In pitch darkness she was standing
    Her broken soul she was mending
    With her eyes damp
    She was looking for a lamp
    To find her way out
    Of darkness existing all about
    He came like the moon in night
    And brought to her world light
    He taught her how to dance in the rain
    He taught her how to let go of pain
    She blossomed in his love
    But she was a caged dove
    Bound by the rules of society
    To live her life with propriety
    She had to let go of her moon
    And look for a lamp soon
    But once used to the moonlight
    She couldn't accept a lamp try hard she might
    Thus her search for a lamp failed
    And in her world the blackness prevailed.
     
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  2. Oct 28, 2016 #2
    vaidehi71

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    I hope the Diwali brings light to her darkness.

    Nice poem and wish you Happy Deepavali.

    Vaidehi.
     
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    PoojaShah

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    Thank you..
    Happy Diwali to you too. :)
     
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    Nice lines, but sad ending :(. Hope she would find the lamp soon
     
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    PoojaShah

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    Thank you... Let's keep our fingers crossed.
     
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    Let her have moonlight every day of her life eradicating blackness ! Nice one. I can feel her love for the moon.

    Happy Diwali Pooja
     
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    PoojaShah

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    Thank you so much...:)
    Happy Diwali to you too.
     
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    PoojaShah

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    I am so glad that you can feel "her" love for the moon.
     
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    Oh are you talking of a real life situation!
    I thought it was an imaginary poem, I remembered first time I thought so and you told imaginary.
    Anyhow whatever one thing I believe is destiny. Nothing can change it.
    Cheers.
     
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    I am a fatalist too.
     
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