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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by KVSiva, Jul 29, 2016.

  1. aarthi28

    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Siva
    Again very nice narration in capturing emotions of everyone.
    So, Uma has started with her PG and that;s a really a good update. But what about Kanna's & Uma's love story.
    Atleast Love after Marriage is required right...Please have Kanna's & Uma's each ones feelings portrayed well.
     
  2. Deepu04

    Deepu04 IL Hall of Fame

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    Siva well narrated ... Good that Uma has coped up from her weakness.... Enjoyed reading.. Pls post the next episode soon
     
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    Ya Aarthi. Agreed to your point.
    In further episodes, lets see how love blossom between them. :)
     
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    Sure Deepu :)
     
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    Siva fine narration.super
     
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    Nice episode Siva ,I think distance will make Kanna & Uma to realize love for each other. Let's see how you take it.
     
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    Episode 18
    Part 1

    It was second saturday of the month and Uma got leave after a month she joined her course.

    Usually she gets off only on Sunday and she gets herself busy with washing clothes and taking rest to gear up for next week.

    But two days leave. She wasnt sure what to do.

    She woke up very late around 10am. After completing her breakfast, she sat to read the local newspaper.

    She noticed that there is an exhibition getting conducted over the weekend.

    She wanted to go but all her friends, though less, went to their native.

    'Cha I might have went to home. hmmmm

    But its ok. Its just a month I came here.

    I dont want to go alone too.'

    She was thinking and turned the pages of the newspaper.

    There were announcement going on over the speaker.

    She sighed and thought who will come to meet me. I dont even have any local guardian.

    She was just reading the newspaper.


    After few minutes, she saw the assistant warden coming and standing in front of her room.

    "Uma, are you fine?"

    Uma confused and asked "Yes mam. I am perfectly alright."

    "Then why havent you come when we are announcing that you have got visitor.

    I checked the register and confirm that you didnt go out and was informing via speaker for you to come down.

    But half an hour gone. But you didnt turn up. So I was worried and came to check.

    Please come down. You have some visitor."

    Uma apologised but didnt tell her that she merely expect anyone to visit her.

    She was thinking who is that visitor and went to reception.


    When she went to see the person who is the visitor, she was unable to believe her eyes.

    First time in her life, she felt she might have looked at the mirror as how she looks like.

    She felt shy that she didnt even change her night dress.

    She was speechless and was just looking at her visitor.


    "Uma, how are you", Kanna smiled and walked towards her.

    Uma rubbed her eyes twice to confirm that she is seeing Kanna only.

    Kanna understood that Uma was taken aback by his sudden visit.

    He walked near her with a smile and called her again "Uma"

    Uma "haaa, Kanna.... you....

    Oh My God. Couldnt accept the reality.

    Hey yesterday when we talk also you didnt mention that you are coming here."


    Kanna "Ya, evening when you messaged me that you are not sure what you may do for next two days, I got a thought of coming here.

    And when I asked Aunty and Priya to accompany me, both were like you go and meet your wife. We dont want to.

    They told that they were not missing her and then said that they want us to spend time.

    So I have decided to travel early in the morning by 4:30am and reached now."


    Uma was unable to come out of the surprise and smiled widely.

    Kanna "Enough of showing your tooth. I just had light breakfast as I have to drive.

    You go and get ready. Lets go out for lunch"


    Uma "Ok Sir. But I just had my breakfast and I need atleast 20 minutes to get ready.

    hmmm

    Do one thing. You go and have something and by then I will be ready."


    Kanna handed over the stuff which Parvathi asked to give her and Uma was able to understand that Parvathi prepared some snacks for her.


    Uma waited for Kanna to leave and started to walk towards her room with a big smile.

    She reached her room, closed the door and started to move her body for the rhythm of one of her favourite song.

    She stopped for a while and was surprised by her own behaviour of why is she doing crazy things.

    She understood that Kanna visiting her made some changes in her hormonal level.

    She felt shy for few seconds and brushed her shyness aside.

    She started looking for which dress to wear and she wore her favourite bottle green color salwar.

    She took bath, spent time in front of the mirror, got ready and came down.

    She wanted to reach reception before Kanna comes back.


    But she failed to reach first as Kanna has already arrived.


    She entered in the register as she is going out.

    Warden and her assistant seeing her so happy for the first time over the month, couldnt control themselves and asked "Uma who is he? Seems so happy after seeing him"

    Uma smiled and introduced him to both of them and they were surprised as "You are married already!!!"

    And then they noticed the scared thread on her neck.

    She smiled and waved at them and left.

    While coming out, Uma started asking, "Kanna, do you know this place? Where are we going now?"

    Kanna "Uma, it was one of my dream to visit Thanjavur temple and I have decided long back, when you got here in TMC (Thanjavur Medical college) that I will be visiting here soon.

    Afterall I need company to go to temple na."

    Uma "So you didnt come to see me. You came to visit temple only?"

    Kanna "Of Course. Then what did you think?"

    Kanna's answer hurt Uma and she stopped walking.
     
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    Ha Ha Nice Update.
    Am Sure Kanna was teasing Uma. She would have thought that he is talking to her in a serious way.
    Please make her to blush by Kanna's presence na....
    Again, Good job dear.
     
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    Hi dear
    Romance on the way. Gaining my confident to go towards that part :tonguewink::tonguewink:
     
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    Hi Leenam
    Let see how their life goes :blush:
     

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