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  1. Dec 23, 2014 #1
    Scorpio707

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    Your voice is what makes me weak…
    Making me forget everything….
    It is you that I seek…

    Your voice is what makes me stumble…
    Time heals they say…true you cast a spell
    On me and today I am humble…

    Your voice is what blinds my eye….
    Future nor the past holds any importance…
    My head bows down, making me shy…..

    Your voice is what touches my soul….
    I wandered to faraway lands, to live apart…
    But time and again I lose control….

    Your voice is like music to my ears….
    Speaking to you I sway in rhythm…
    Forgetting all my fears….

    Your voice I can forget not ever….
    Sound of my name from you is so dear….
    Will love you till my last breathe….
    Wish I can make this to you clear……
     
    Scorpio707, Dec 23, 2014
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  2. Dec 23, 2014 #2
    parineetha

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    ???? whose voice, that music voice...tell me tell me...

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    Wattt? Mine eh? :roll:...Oh thank u Scorps, like Shreya Ghoshal U know :)

    :))))) Fun part aside, Lovely poem...Ur becoming enviously awesome these days!
     
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    madhuprabha

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    Hello Scorpio,
    Lovely poem,
    but why are ur poems talking of lost love, hmmmmmmmm....
     
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    umasivasankar

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    lovely poem S7...
    missing ur DH????ideasmiley
     
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    This is the "Voice of Scorps" - nice one S7.

    High decibel voice that plays silently on the mind.
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Yes it's you Neetu...how did you guess ??? It was a secret :tongue ....now you got to know about it shakehead

    Thanks again for your feedback...know what...the ones that I write lousily are liked, and the ones that I write with real interest fall back...LOL
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Hahhaha...good Q....I don't have actual answer though sorry Madhu :bonk...I start something and end up with something :wink:...will try to write happy ones definitely....thank you
     
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    parineetha

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    Hey you...I come n blabber something the moment it catches my eyes...

    Only sometimes I miss OK, coz I rarely visit poem section ;)
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Random blabs ah:wink: ......ok y rarely poetry section??? Kaa kaa with you :thumbsdown
     
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    parineetha

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    Gosh! I dig my own grave :))))
    see, I have no poetic sense sweety...even to appreciate we need some na..that's why. ve
     
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