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Your Memory

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Feb 3, 2025.

  1. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

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    You think I don't care for you
    But your thought makes me nostalgic,
    You think I am very unromantic
    But your memory makes me a poet.

    The fragrance of your billowing hair
    The unfathomable depth of your dark eyes,
    The beatitude of your statuesque face
    Make me think you were a goddess.

    Your serene voice so charming
    Every word fraught with connotations,
    Your singing so sweetly melodic
    Made my days a living paradise.

    The rendezvous by the seaside
    When you crooned your secrets in my ear,
    I came to know the meaning of life
    I came to know what is empyreal.
     
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  2. umaakumar

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    Dear Tamrakshar,

    Very nice

    Regards
    Uma
     
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    Dear Uma ji, thanks for your feedback! Dear Mistt, thanks for your like!
     
  4. Mistt

    Mistt IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi @Tamrakshar,
    It’s always nice feeling to read your writings especially your poetical side.
    You expressed a person’s feelings delightfully in your poem when that person has been missing his loved one. You had chosen exquisite words and they elaborated the depth of their pleasant bond.
     
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    Dear Mistt,

    Very well said! I agree with you and appreciate your comment. Thanks!
     
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