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Young or old if we have faith we can overcome anything

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by iyerviji, Oct 21, 2013.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    If the road is smooth then it is easy to drive
    same way if our mind is clear
    and heart is without worries
    our life is smooth and we are in peace

    Some days we feel low and nothing good
    that time we feel should have a shoulder to rest
    we need a friend who understands us
    who is there in our joys and sorrows

    While young we are energetic and active
    and feel we can go through anything in life
    but when we get old its not the same
    even sometimes walking becomes difficult
    and feel we have no energy

    At those times only we should not lose hope
    and think of the days we were strong
    and without losing hope should try
    and bring our energy back and make our life smooth

    If we have faith in God and leave everything to Him
    He will guide us and show the path
    Our elders are there always blessing us
    so our road will be smooth and life enjoyable

     
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    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Revathy and Swathi dear thanks for the superfast like which made my day
     
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    swathiiyer Silver IL'ite

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    Awesome... Didnt knew you write poems as well... Keep writing
     
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    Sometimes suddenly it comes to my mind. Had gone to temple and suddenly was feeling low and was feeling tired to walk too. So this poem came in my mind. Actually I had some work to do but I thought before I forget let me write the poem.

    Thanks for your appreciation. Morning also had written a poem in tamil and translated the same in English too
     
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    Well said vijima!!!
     
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    thanks Dinny dear thought you will reply in poem form:)
     
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