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  1. rgsrinivasan

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    As I rushed along with many
    To get out of that station I saw
    Two small orbs of frozen honey.
    It felt I was held by an icy claw.

    Perhaps nothing goes away
    Though you desperately go out.
    The greatest healer can never play
    Against the timeless that stands out.

    Its been two decades. May be more?
    But feels like it just was yesterday.
    Melting eyes and minted new words
    Of not joy but sorrow filled that day.

    You didn't wave then as I left,
    But stood there like a statue.
    Angrier for getting a "no" had left
    Me lacking warmth that was due.

    If there ever was a wish after that
    It was to never see you again.
    Alas!, there was yet another that
    Hoped to see you one day, again.

    How can someone even forget
    The existence of one so dear?
    I didn't know that. Can never get
    That question ever answered here.

    One day we may talk to each other
    As though nothing happened at all.
    Neither of us will be asking whether
    The other is hurt. It will go on!
     
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    Very nice:)
     
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    Thanks MaruthiRao, for your like and appreciation. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     
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    Hey sure, why not, it was so touchy, wish to read another one from you, have a great day ahead:)
     
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    Thanks a lot MaruthiRao for another feedback.
    I will try posting some more when I find time. Besides, I did post a lot of my verses already since 2010.
    So you can find them and read if you like [and possibly kill time :) ]. -rgs
     
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    Yeah sure, i will :) thank you:)
     
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    welcome Sir:)
     

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