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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Aug 30, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    I found someone motivating
    Me while I was going through
    A difficult phase so enervating.
    Tell me dear! Was that you?

    Waking up in the middle of the night
    And shouting incoherently too,
    Someone soothed and made me light
    Tell me dear! Was that you?

    Being hailed by one and all,
    For something that I achieved,
    But felt good after I received a call.
    Tell me dear! Was that you?

    If none of the above were you,
    No problem dear! Ask me how?
    From now on I suggest that you
    Be with me! Is that fine my love?
     
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  2. sapthu02

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    was beautiful.. wud love to say yes , if someone asks me this (though iam married now.. :( )
     
  3. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks very much for your overwhelming appreciation Sapthana. Very happy to receive your continuous support and motivation. -rgs.
     
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    Good one.. Good one RGS....
     
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    Thanks Pallavi, for your appreciation. -rgs
     

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