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You Happened To Me....

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Jun 1, 2018.

  1. Scorpio707

    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    You happened to me,
    Like the night to the day…
    Like the rainbow after it rains…
    Like the stars in the night…
    Like the waves to the sea…
    Like the flames of a fire…
    Like the branch of a tree…
    Like the music to a beat…
    Like the words on my lips…
    Like the steps of the feet…
    Like death to a life…
    You happened to me.
     
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  2. Srama

    Srama Finest Post Winner

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    And I happened to see it as soon as you posted. How Meenu? Just how?

    Loved the simplicity of the poem....like the night to the day, like the waves to the sea huh? Beautiful!
     
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    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Sabitha :) , wasn't expecting to hear from you at all - now what do I say, you just happened to be :beer-toast1:, simply delighted to hear from you. Glad you liked it, you know I rarely write these days.
     
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    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Hey Meenu lovely poem. Loved every line ...I am reminded of this song ‘Jaisa khilta gulab.. jaise shayar ka khwaab. Ek ladki ko dekha .....’
    should try singing your poem to this tune. Good to see you after a long time. Hope all is well
     
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    Nice poem with lines full of love ..superb:thumbup:
     
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    Was going though the posts and stumbled upon these lines..Very nicely written :)
     
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    Hi Laks - how are you doing? Nice to hear from you, happy my poems are being read even now on IL :D . Rarely pen poems these days so.
    Let me know if you were able to hum/sing to this one, curious :). Take care.
     
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    Hahaha....full of love. Wasn't thinking that way when I wrote :lol: . Thank you.
     
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    Thanks Supriya. Glad you stumbled :):thumbsup:.
     

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