Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 8, 2007.
Please go through my poem and send review if you liked them.
Another good poem,enjoyed this one too. I also like this calm dawn you have described. I am not an early riser, but at times,when I wake at this specific time, I find a peace and silence that is so soothing. And I resolve to wake at this time daily. Is this Ushakkalam ?
Your poem is very good and touchy. I am reminded of the scene in the film My Fair lady in which the heroin as the flower girl will go to the market in the mid-night and fall asleep due to the calm. But, she will be awakened by the noise of market place in the dawn.
Very Nice.What i read in the last paragraph
The tranquil peace is shattered through
By the blaring sounds those horns do.
is really true.Keep posting such poems in the future.:2thumbsup:
Thank you for the encouragement. The poems I am submitting here are old ones. Of late, I do not find time to write due to my busy schedule. I yearn to get back to my old days of poetry writing when I had the time as well as the mood and right situations that made poems flow out of my heart.Ofcourse, I will be submitting whatever poems I have written till now as and when I find time so that poetry lovers can enjoy reading and comment on them.
Thank you for your encouraging review. Sure, I will keep submitting more poems for the pleasure of poetry lovers.
Thank you for reviewing my poem. Its nice and encouraging to know that my poem is being read by many.
(sorry, I am not able to address you by name because I do not know it!)
That was a good poem.....true that with the glaring sun, we lose the tranquility and the dreams ! keep them coming...enjoyed this one!
Thank you Sudha for the encouraging review of my poem "Tranquility of Dawn".
Will post poems frequently for everybody's pleasure.
Malathy, that was a very nice poem! Even though i wake up at 4.30 am, my schedule is pretty hectic! However, on certain days [ when my husband is out of town!] I sit outside with a hot cup of coffee in the cool, cool dawn, savouring the peace, the freshness of another day, with the trees and the plants swaying gently in the early morning breeze - mmmm...luxury!