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Yet another poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Malathijagan, Apr 8, 2007.

  1. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Please go through my poem and send review if you liked them.
    Happy reading!
    Malathi
     

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  2. Vidya24

    Vidya24 Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Malathi(jagan),

    Another good poem,enjoyed this one too. I also like this calm dawn you have described. I am not an early riser, but at times,when I wake at this specific time, I find a peace and silence that is so soothing. And I resolve to wake at this time daily. Is this Ushakkalam ?

    regards
    Vidya
     
  3. Tamildownunder

    Tamildownunder Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Malathi,

    Your poem is very good and touchy. I am reminded of the scene in the film My Fair lady in which the heroin as the flower girl will go to the market in the mid-night and fall asleep due to the calm. But, she will be awakened by the noise of market place in the dawn.

    Regards,

    TDU
     
  4. BhargaviChakravarthy

    BhargaviChakravarthy Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi,
    Very Nice.What i read in the last paragraph

    The tranquil peace is shattered through
    By the blaring sounds those horns do.

    is really true.Keep posting such poems in the future.:2thumbsup:

    BC


     
  5. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hello Vidhya!
    Thank you for the encouragement. The poems I am submitting here are old ones. Of late, I do not find time to write due to my busy schedule. I yearn to get back to my old days of poetry writing when I had the time as well as the mood and right situations that made poems flow out of my heart.Ofcourse, I will be submitting whatever poems I have written till now as and when I find time so that poetry lovers can enjoy reading and comment on them.
    Rgds,
    Malathi



     
  6. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Bhargavi!
    Thank you for your encouraging review. Sure, I will keep submitting more poems for the pleasure of poetry lovers.
    Malathi

     
  7. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hello!
    Thank you for reviewing my poem. Its nice and encouraging to know that my poem is being read by many.
    Rgds,
    Malathi
    (sorry, I am not able to address you by name because I do not know it!)


     
  8. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear malathi,
    That was a good poem.....true that with the glaring sun, we lose the tranquility and the dreams ! keep them coming...enjoyed this one!
     
  9. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Thank you Sudha for the encouraging review of my poem "Tranquility of Dawn".
    Will post poems frequently for everybody's pleasure.
    Regards,
    Malathi
     
  10. SubhaD

    SubhaD New IL'ite

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    Malathy, that was a very nice poem! Even though i wake up at 4.30 am, my schedule is pretty hectic! However, on certain days [ when my husband is out of town!] I sit outside with a hot cup of coffee in the cool, cool dawn, savouring the peace, the freshness of another day, with the trees and the plants swaying gently in the early morning breeze - mmmm...luxury!
     

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