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Woman In The Mirror

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Aug 9, 2017.

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  1. Oct 12, 2017 #21
    Padhmu

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    very interesting to read.
     
    Padhmu, Oct 12, 2017
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  2. Nov 7, 2017 #22
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    I went and searched for these lyrics after I read your story. Such a lovely one!

    I'm starting with the man in the mirror
    I'm asking him to change his ways
    And no message could have been any clearer
    If you wanna make the world a better place
    Take a look at yourself and then make a change....

    " Woman in the Mirror " is so sweet
     
    HazelPup, Nov 7, 2017
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  3. Nov 8, 2017 #23
    garcia

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    Hi,
    Nice story and beautifully ended. I really like it.
    Thanks!!
     
    garcia, Nov 8, 2017
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  4. Nov 8, 2017 #24
    AnooSA

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    Awesome BB, love your style of writing...
     
    AnooSA, Nov 8, 2017
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  5. Nov 10, 2017 #25
    blackbeauty84

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    Thank you Padhmu
     
    blackbeauty84, Nov 10, 2017
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  6. Nov 10, 2017 #26
    blackbeauty84

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    Wow these are nice lines. Thanks Hazelpup for the feedback.
     
    blackbeauty84, Nov 10, 2017
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  7. Nov 10, 2017 #27
    blackbeauty84

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    Thank you garcia. Happy you liked it.
     
    blackbeauty84, Nov 10, 2017
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  8. Nov 10, 2017 #28
    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks Anoo.
     
    blackbeauty84, Nov 10, 2017
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  9. Mar 13, 2018 #29
    kavinaya

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    The story and way it is written is engaging and beautiful!
     
    kavinaya, Mar 13, 2018
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