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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Mar 7, 2017.

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  1. Jul 7, 2018 #481
    kkrish

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    Hi @blackbeauty84
    I am amazed and feel like this :worship2::worship2: at your creativity.

    Not just the story line, the suspense, the fact that age is no barrier, but what impressed me most is the strong message that open communication within family members is the most effective for developing a strong and trusted relationship, not only between husband and wife but also among other members. (that was one long sentence..pardon me)

    In a world where there is so much negativity between people, your story was a balm to the frayed mind.
    Somewhere, if this family really exists,may they be the beacon for others to follow and live a contented life.:thumbup::beer-toast1:
     
    kkrish, Jul 7, 2018
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  2. Jul 9, 2018 #482
    blackbeauty84

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    Thaks Aarthi for the feedback and encouragement. I'm super happy that you all liked it.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 9, 2018
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  3. Jul 9, 2018 #483
    blackbeauty84

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    Many thanks Deepika. So so happy that you liked it.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 9, 2018
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  4. Jul 9, 2018 #484
    blackbeauty84

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    Thanks thanks Krish for the generous feedback. So happy that it touched a chord in you. :worship2::worship2:for the finest post nomination.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 9, 2018
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  5. Jul 10, 2018 #485
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    Awesome BB. Nice closure.Different from the regular ones. Eager to read your next story soon.
     
    Sachini, Jul 10, 2018
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  6. Jul 11, 2018 #486
    blackbeauty84

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    Many thanks Sachini..yes yes I started working on next story. Will start posting it soon.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 11, 2018
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    Loved the story BB.
    The characters are so real and positive .
     
    SunPa, Jul 11, 2018
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  8. Jul 11, 2018 #488
    sreeram

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    Will miss Jai, Priya and especially the trio. The boys had a good rapport within themselves and also as a family.

    Very well knitted story and superb flow of narration. Congrats on the completion and All the best for your new venture.
     
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  9. Jul 11, 2018 #489
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    Thanks sunpa for the encouraging feedback. Have a nice day ahead.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 11, 2018
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    blackbeauty84

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    Many many thanks Priya.Feeling great to receive feedback from a wonderful writer like you.
     
    blackbeauty84, Jul 11, 2018
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