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When You Are With Me

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Mar 7, 2017.

  1. blackbeauty84

    blackbeauty84 IL Hall of Fame

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    Sorry for the much delayed reply. Thank you Rith. Do continue reading the story.
     
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    Ouch..Thats a pretty tough situation to handle. I hope you will cope up well ! Do take care of your self!

    As always I loved the episode especially the patch up that happened between Mom and Son. How many issues can be solved effortlessly by apologizing ??? Very good episode. I am sure you are under stress whenever you get some time please do some proof reading to this episode, it might need some minor corrections/validations, not that it is wrong but it is unclear.
    --PS
     
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    Thanks for the frank feedback Peddadas.
    Yes definitely this is not my best. I'll take your feedback and do the proof reading.
     
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    Thank you
     
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    No problem take your time. Take Care!
     
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    Chapter-50


    Next day Srikanth left for his college. Vivaan was standing next to Sriram’s bed.


    ‘You have so many injuries.Is daddy also injured like you?’ Vivaan asked innocently.

    Sriram didn’t have the heart to say their dad was several times more injured.


    ‘I’ll take you to hospital when I go for checkup, you can see him for yourself. Now can you help me with this pillow please? ‘ Sriram asked. From the time Sriram was discharged he was looked after by Vivaan and housekeepers. Painkillers made him sleep and he whiled away rest of time by his exam preparation.


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    Jai was moved to a hospital room form CCU ,Priya was sitting in the room allotted to him. Jai still remained unconscious. Later in the evening Vijay came around and sat with her.


    ‘Priya..what’s the purpose of waiting like this? Shouldn’t you be concentrating on your business?’ he asked.


    ‘True. But I will not be able to run it worrying about Jai every minute. He is not even conscious.’ She said.


    ‘It’s matter of time before he becomes conscious. I have planned to stay in the city till Jai is out of hospital. I’ll keep an eye on him and I have instructed all the staffs regarding the same. Seems Jai’s chairman has spoken to hospital MD as well..’ He said firmly.


    Priya still spent time shuttling between hospital and her bakery. Chairman visited Jai almost everyday when he was in town.


    It was one such day Priya was returning to hospital from a long day at bakery. She could distinctly hear Chairman’s voice


    ‘When you get well, let’s talk through things Jai..’ he seemed to be saying.


    Priya rushed inside the room to see Jai was still unconscious.


    She looked at chairman who and said ‘For a second I thought, you were talking to Jai.’


    He looked at the ceiling and said ‘Wish I were….I got carried away.’ He looked at her eyes ‘ Priya, When things are bit settled Kishore’s lawyer would like to have a word with you regarding the case. It’s not that I still defend him, he is my brother in law and that doesn’t change.’


    ‘I would also need to discuss this with boys in Jai’s absence.’ She replied.


    ‘Of course..’ he nodded and left after a short talk.


    Few days later when Priya entered the hospital Vijay was around and greeted her ‘ Priya, seems Jai regained consciousness. Seems he woke up when nurse was changing IV and asked for you. But within minutes he became unconscious.’ He said in an exciting tone.


    ‘I was getting worried.’ She confessed.


    ‘This is quite common. Anyway be around, he might wake up anytime. How is Sriram?’ he asked.


    ‘As per his doctor he is healing well..’ Priya said.


    ‘Good to hear. I’ll come around post consultation. Give me a ring once he wakes up.’ He said and left.


    Priya didn’t leave the room that day was working from the hospital room. She looked up from her laptop to see Jai looking at her and saying her name in faintest whisper.
     
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    Good!! Jai became Conscious !!!
     
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    Wow finally our hero is getting back to normal :banana::cheer: interesting updates :beer-toast1::clap2: I loved innocence wish he is there in the next update as well. Nice to see Mr S regretting for his act and things following on place :banana:look forward for next epi Bb ma'am

    Keep rocking and thank you!
     

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