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"when Love Is Not Madness, Its Not Love" - The True Blessing.

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Jul 17, 2019.

  1. Deepika23

    Deepika23 Silver IL'ite

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    @IniyaaSri , what u had written is absolutely correct. Marriage life is a secret. The more you dig the more complicated life becomes.
     
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  2. ammusatheesh

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    Sometimes out of frustration we dont know wat we are doing...wat Veni is doing is not correct still appreciate Rishi tolerance in it....

    Wat is this when will Tulasi and Vamsi will talk...poor guys...
     
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    Diya's transformation is really superb Iniya…:number_one:

    Likewise Vamsi and thulasi's moments are also good....entha moment la ivanukula kadhal puthadhu :hearteyes::hearteyes: (when did he start falling for thulasi) Vamsi's promise to his dad is adorable. That's the spirit :thumbup: Good luck da thambi (bro) vetri unakke!!

    Troy's entry sequence was super cute....:cheer::cheer::cheer:Days are moving so fast :fearscream::fearscream: u didn't invite us for their wedding :rage::rage::rage:

    Thank god u didn't invite for this brat's wedding too :BangHead:
    :smash2::smash2::smash2::smash2: This is all because of his mom....and Saravanan can't be spared because he was too much focused on Veni and kottai-a vitting (lost his empire) and now he is helpless and I really feel sad looking at his state :facepalm::facepalm: And Ven's attitude in comparing Saravanan with rishi for every small thing is really sick :smash2:But impressed with Rishi's patience :clap2::clap2::worship2: Not sure when he is going to burst out :eek:
    etho velaikarana dominate panura mathiri irukku (treating him like a slave) :BangHead: Guess its her own blunders which is not keeping her happy with what she has :yikes: what's the point in cribbing. However this is the reality we always fail to forget this....sema Iniya every statement has its own message to convey the readers :thumbsup:

    Fantastic Iniya :worship2::worship2::worship2::number_one: You have put in a nutshell about life post wedding :thumbup: waiting to see what happens next. Good Night.
     
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  4. IniyaaSri

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    Episode 61:


    Months passed, Nivin was blessed with baby boy and the entire family was happy in welcoming the new born. Veni was living life with frustration and she wasn’t happy with her life.

    “Hello! Maaa….What’s dad doing?” – Veni

    “Told you na….He is more into temples these days….And yes he is same. Doesn’t talk much! Most of the time locked in his room meditating or listening to divine songs….” – Veni’s mom.

    “Hmmmm!!! So are you free now? You were doing too much work these days! How are you ma?” – Veni

    Veni’s mom smiled.

    “It took you 29 years to ask this to me?! ‘How are you ma’ “- Veni’s mom’s eyes were getting moist.

    “Maa…… What happened to you? I do call you often…”- Veni

    “But the moment you dial, you ask ‘how is dad’, ‘ what is he doing’, is he ok these days?’…..” – Veni’s mom

    “Maa….but….he wasn’t ok….Thats why asked about him” – Veni

    “Hmmmm ok leave it…. What lunch? you Had?” – Veni’s mom

    “That’s a big head ache, the expense is going out of control and we have asked the cook not to come! I am cooking for the past one week and seems we don’t get along well!” – Veni

    “What happened you know.... Seems they use coconut oil for cooking! And I just hate it! They cant eat without the smell of coconut in the dish! Highly irritating for me! I just tried for a day and entire day I was sitting with nausea.” – Veni

    “Oh!!! you know what? I love coconut oil! Thats my most favorite. The flavour it gives to the dishes na.....Its awesome!!! – Veni’s mom

    "What?!!! You never used at our home?" - Veni was surprised.

    "Hmmmm yeah!" - Veni's mom smiled.

    “Anyways! Seeing my dull face, Rishi asked his parents to adjust! Relieved! But still cooking is a big headache!

    “Oh! So nice of Rishi” – Veni’s mom

    “They are uninvited guest After all! They have to accept!! What’s the big deal about Rishi?! At times he irritates me as well! All men are same I guess!” – Veni sighed.

    “Maaa!!! Why all men are not good like dad?!!!”- Veni asked

    “How will you react if Rishi demands a lump sum amount from your dad?” – Veni’s mom asked all of a sudden

    “What?! Hello madam! My dad is ready to give anything and everything! This stupid Rishi is not agreeing! And you know that” – Veni

    “Imagine your dad is poor! He doesn’t have that much money! Imagine na! Imagine..... Rishi is demanding a heavy amount from your dad! You got to close your eyes now! Imagine well! And then tell me now” – Veni’s mom

    “How dare?! If he asks money from my poor dad, I wont even think for a second! I will slap him at once and walk away with my dad! Anyways! Things are vice versa here! My fate” – Veni

    “Great! Is it nice of Rishi to demand money from his father in law? I mean your daddy?” – Veni’s mom

    “Heartless human being I would say!” – Veni

    “Then your dad is one!” – Veni’s mom.

    “What?!!! What are you saying?” – Veni

    “I had to pay a huge dowry for marrying your dad! I don’t know what miscommunication the elders had; my dad has to give a gold bracelet to your dad on the day of wedding! My dad managed to arrange everything else your grandma demanded but due to some miscommunication, the bracelet wasn’t there” – Veni’s mom.

    “Grandma demanded huh?!!! Really?! By the way! What happened?” – Veni was getting curious

    “My dad didn’t have that much money in hand and he begged to your dad and grandma! They stood stone hearted! You know what your dad said?! I won’t marry your girl unless you give that gold bracelet! Be genuine! Don’t act like a fraud! Keep up your words!” – Veni’s mom’s eyes teared

    “Maaa…..!!!” – Veni couldn’t believe what she heard. That was the biggest shock of her life.

    “I was treated like a product! But here the product itself has to pay a huge amount! So that the product can serve the consumers forever” – Veni’s mom wept

    “Maaa!!!” – It was painful for Veni to hear those words!

    “So finally! My dad got a gold bangle from his sister and bought a gold bracelet for your dad then and there! So my marriage happened and I stepped into your grandma’s house” – Veni’s mom

    “They were happy with the dowry?” – Veni

    “Dont know but I wasn’t happy even a single day! I was a maid! I have to eat what your grandma says! I had to wear whatever she says! I have to talk on her command! And your dad didn’t even mind! And he was 50% of your grandma! Even he has tortured me! There are many things that I couldn't tell you. Even if he has to take me to temple, he was afraid about his mom’s reaction. And finally we never stepped out of the house together!” – Veni’s mom

    “Really?!!!” – Veni

    “Hmmmm! And then I became pregnant! I was allowed to my mom’s house only a month before delivery! I very badly wanted to be with my mom during those days! But they didn’t allow me saying its not their family custom! There came the day when I was admitted in the hospital and I was eagerly waiting for you amidst a very long labour” – Veni’s mom said and Veni was feeling very different. They both never shared a good bonding! Veni’s mom never pampered her! It was always Nivin for her! She thought she loved 'son' rather than daughter!

    “You were waiting for me?” – Veni asked as she feeling very different!

    “Hmmm!!! I believed it would be a girl and I very badly wanted a girl! Only a girl can understand mom’s pain! Or I should say I believed it that way……After a long labour, you came out! I was crying in happiness” -Veni’s mom said and Veni was feeling guilty for no reason.

    “The first person to hold you…. was your grandma…. the lady who tortured me even before tying the knot!.....I was lying quietly….Your dad walked in and he said, my princess’s name would be my mom’s name! Your grandma was standing there with a proud smile!” – Veni’s mom

    “That’s the day they took you away from me and you never came back…..!” – Veni’s mom cried and Veni cried! She didn’t know why…

    “From the day you were born, I wasn’t allowed to choose anything for you! I touched you only when I had to feed you! Other than that, you were her own daughter! She was one who brought you up! And your dad was proud in being your hero! He liked when you saw him as a hero! And you….you were growing into a replica of your grandmother….Don't know whether you remember or not….You wont even touch a person just because have they darker skin tone……But your dad was very serious about it and changed you! You were after all his princess na……Hmm” – Veni’s mom

    For the first time Veni was feeling different about her mother. She was actually seeing her as woman with a heart.

    “And then Nivin came….Being the second child, he was all mine. Your grandmother and father were too busy in pampering you that didn’t bother much about Nivin! I felt like a mother only after Nivin’s birth. Feeding him, choosing dresses for him, taking him out, talking to him….”- Veni’s mom broke out suddenly.

    “Talking to him?!!!……” – Veni

    “I wasn’t even allowed to talk to you Veni…..!!!” -Veni’s mom cried and Veni wept quietly.

    “So….I just showered Nivin with all the love that I had in my heart! Actually it was double on him I think. The love that I couldn’t show on you…..was getting showered on him….And now….he …Too much love, too much pampering......And thats how he got spoilt I think......” – Veni’s mom cried.

    Veni felt like falling on her feet and begging for forgiveness.

    Both ladies wept together and soon there was silence.

    “Veni….According to you I was just a cook right?! You had someone who would cook anything at anytime for anyone! And you call her maa right?” – Veni’s mom asked and it hit hard for Veni that she couldn’t open her mouth.

    “Maaa…….Sorry maaaa” -Veni wept.

    “But why didn’t you walk away from the wedding hall when dad and grandma demanded bracelet?” – Veni

    “I can walk away! But where would I go?” – Veni’s mom

    “Your parents” – Veni

    “According to them, It would be a big shame and they would kill me! Moreover I wasn’t educated enough to work and my family wasn’t well enough to feed me forever! Getting me married was their happiness….a relief in other words…” – Veni’s mom

    “Just because no one would feed you, you agreed to that wedding?” – Veni

    “Hmmmm yes…..! Today everything is different right? Those days were totally different…” – Veni’s mom

    “Hmmmm” – Veni

    “Dad is bad?” – Veni asked softly without being able to shatter the image she had for 29 years.

    “I didn’t say so” -Veni’s mom

    “Then?” – Veni

    “He was a wonderful dad but not a good husband! A worst husband in fact”- Veni’s mom

    “Maaa….!” – Veni

    “Good dads need not be good husbands dear…...!” – Veni’s mom said softly.

    “Even grandma was bad?”- Veni

    “If you have one such mother in law, you yourself would have known the answer” – Veni’s mom

    “Leave ma! Anyways she is no more now” – Veni

    “She is no more now! But my 30 years of life as a slave?!!! Will it come back?! My husband and my darling daughter???!!! Will I get them back?!” – Veni’s mom cried heavily.

    “I was more of a nanny to you! I always wanted a girl child but when you came, I wasn’t even allowed to spend time with you” – Veni’s mom.

    “Maaa! Don’t cry na! I will be good here after to you” – Veni said childishly.

    “Everything is over dear…..! Things wont come back” – Veni’s mom

    “Maa don’t cry na…” -Veni

    Veni didn’t want her mom to cry further! She did not know what to do…

    “What about your son and daughter in law…..” – Veni asked suddenly.

    “Hmmmm! Seems Nivin is good with business! And she has decided to assist in the business” – Veni’s mom.

    “Yeah last time you said! Confirmed now?”- Veni

    “hmmm yes! I can take care of the baby! You know what……He is crawling these days…..! I will send you video….” – Veni’s mom smiled suddenly.

    “Hmmmm! Ok ma” – Veni

    “That’s why am saying! Good dads need not be good husbands! But good husbands will mostly end up becoming wonderful fathers! Have kids soon…” – Veni’s mom

    “We both are always fighting! And now another good reason! His parents….You know what happened yesterday….” – Veni started

    “Hey! Wait wait! He is pulling everything from the shelf! Naughty boy!!!! Will call you later!” – Veni’s mom hung the call and Veni sat in shock.

    She cursed herself thinking of how she yelled at her mom for Nivin’s immature act. She felt very bad for her mother who was having everything in her heart for almost 30 years! And yet she managed to serve the family with a calm face. I yelled at her without even knowing what she went through all these years! So judgmental I was....Just like most people...! Sorry maaa!!!

    “Maaaaa!!!!!” – Veni cried heavily.
     
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  5. IniyaaSri

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    : ) : ) : )
    Have posted today's episode Deepika dear : )
    Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here : ) : ) : )
    Have a lovely day ahead : ) : ) : )
     
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    Yeah right : ) : ) : )
    Have posted today's episode dear! : ) : ) : )
     
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    Hey girl!!! Thank you so much! : )
    Hope you are doing good!
    Was waiting for your all these days! : ) : ) : )
    Loved reading each and every line of yours!
    I am sure, all the readers would have enjoyed your lively elaborated feedback!
    Thank you thank you and thank you so much:worship2::worship2::worship2:
    Have posted today's episode : ) : ) : )
    Have a wonderful day ahead : ) : ) : )
     
  8. ammusatheesh

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    It's TRUE.. many mom had gone through these in earlier days...we will be knowing when it's too late ...feeling sad of Veni and her mom...hopefully Veni will change and understand Rishi now...how he is adjusting for her....good guy
     
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    iniya.... you are such a master..... wowww what a way of showing life... from saying marriage is a secret and finally reliving half of it in veni's mom life.....kudos... iniya.... i really love the way you write....
     
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    Iniya awesome episode. The way you told the conversation between mom and daughter. Vowww... And the real feelings of a women burnt inside themselves for the family is portrayed very well. You are a great master in capturing emotions dear.
     
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