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"when Love Is Not Madness, Its Not Love" - The True Blessing.

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Jul 17, 2019.

  1. meerutha

    meerutha Silver IL'ite

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    Ini...last convo? have to wait till monday to know more:icon_pc::icon_pc:....dont do this...let them be good friends and cherish their moment na...(just a thought) i know you would make it far far far better:kissingheart::kissingheart: .....and now grandma found what joyal has in his heart (I think) :hearteyes::hearteyes::hearteyes: nice....good going.... no extra episodes ah dear...:sob::sob:
     
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  2. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Thought of writing an extra episode today! Will try my best to post one more episode today! :facepalm: Not sure though.
    and regarding Veni and Krishna lets see whats going to happen ; )
    And yes you are right. Grandma got to know whats in Jo's heart! : D
    Thank you so much for the lively feedback : ) : ) : )
     
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    We will know soon dear!
    Posting one more episode now Ammu dear : ) : ) : )
     
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    Episode 26:


    Joyal was returning home from college and he saw Diya talking with two boys on road. They didn’t seem like school students though. Joyal drove away fast so that she doesn’t see him. She was talking with a serious face and Joyal sighed with relief.

    “I wonder why she keeps talking with unknown guys! Let me warn Tulasi! Even she will get spoiled”

    “I really wonder how they both got together first of all! Diya is completely different and Tulasi is on the other end. Even in friendship does opposites attract? “– Joyal asked himself.

    “I feel Diya is not on right path and I won’t encourage their friendship here after.” – Joyal said to himself.

    Joyal reached home and Tulasi was busy playing with neighborhood kids.

    “Oye! Come here!” – Joyal said as he parked his two-wheeler.

    “I cant!” – Tulasi showed her tongue

    “When will you grow up?” – Joyal

    “You don’t have any other work?! Started pulling my legs at once you reached home?” – Tulasi

    “Fine! Let me come” – Joyal

    “Let me come! Tell me what” – Tulasi said as she walked towards the compound wall.

    “I saw Diya talking to guys on road. You both were already in trouble meeting unknown guys. I don’t think she realized her mistake” – Joyal

    “When did you see?” – Tulasi

    “Just now! I don’t think they are of your school” – Joyal

    “But I feel she doesn’t talk to guys these days…. She has changed a lot…” – Tulasi

    “Just because she is your friend, you are trying to save her is it?” – Joyal

    “No. I think she doesn’t have any bad intentions. I know her from childhood” – Tulasi was firm

    “Then why the hell does she talk to unknown guys on road….” - Joyal

    “There might be hundreds of reasons for that Joyal! Just because she talks to unknown guys, you can’t have your own conclusions” - Tulasi said and Joyal became quiet.

    He quietly took his college bag and started walking away.

    “Oye! What? Going away without saying anything?” – Tulasi

    “I can see grandma’s upbringing very well!” – Joyal

    “What do you mean?” – Tulasi

    “Never judging others….She instilled that trait in you naa….I meant that” – Joyal

    “Hmmmmm! Yes” – Tulasi

    “I didn’t want you to get into any trouble because of Diya… So just told you what I saw” – Joyal

    “Yes! you just saw! You don’t know what really happened” – Tulasi

    “I agree madam” – Joyal sighed as he removed his shoes.

    “Good boy” – Tulasi laughed

    Grandma smiled as she happened to hear everything sitting beside the window.


    Diya was wearing a long floral chiffon skirt and an off-white t shirt on top. Her hair was tied into ponytail and her eyes were looking for Joyal as she opened the gate.

    “Wow! Nice skirt” – Tulasi exclaimed

    “Thank you thank you” – Diya bowed

    “Ha Ha! Come” – Tulasi

    “Come lets go to the terrace!” – Diya said all of a sudden and Tulasi understood at once.

    Both climbed the steps and sat together.

    “You have got to tell me something right?” – Tulasi

    “Yes…A guy proposed me today! Seems he lives in the same street” – Diya

    “Oh! Proposal ?!!! What did you say? Wait wait! Let me guess” – Tulasi

    “You said you will meet him in the coffee shop?” – Tulasi

    “No” – Diya

    “You would have given your phone number. Right?” Tulasi

    “no” – Diya

    “Then? Meeting him somewhere else?” – Tulasi

    “I told him something else!” – Diya

    “What was that?” – Tulasi

    Diya got up and started walking.

    “Come on tell na! usually you do this when someone proposes you na…This time what did you tell?” – Tulasi

    “I said I love someone else and not to disturb me again” – Diya said and Tulasi bursted into laughter

    “That’s a good one! Good idea! I think this will work! Good prank” – Tulasi

    “What I said is true Tulasi ........and am not joking” - Diya said seriously and Tulasi was shocked.



    Time was 5 o clock and Veni was feeling fresh after a short break. she sat on the bench that was provided for her. There wasn’t much crowd and Veni was looking at other projects and demonstrations as she sat. Without any intention, Veni’s eyes happened to see Krishna. He smiled as he demonstrated to the people. His knowledge over the model was immense and he explained it very well. The confidence and command over the language and the subject made him very attractive. His thin streak of holy ash on forehead suddenly made him look stunningly handsome for Veni’s eyes and Veni didn’t realize that she is looking at him.

    “Oh my God! What happened to me” – Veni jerked the next second.

    Someone yelled “Krishnaaaaa” and Veni stood all of a sudden

    “Oops! Its him…Not me” – Veni said to herself with a smile.

    She did not know why she kept smiling and why she couldn’t stop her smile....

    “What’s happening to me” – Veni gasped with an involuntary smile.
     
  5. IniyaaSri

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    Dear all, Have posted two episodes today since I couldn't post yesterday!
    Happy weekend everyone : ) : ) : )
     
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    Have a nice weekend Ini
     
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    Thank you thank you Iniyaaa...that's a good one..
     
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    Iniya You are such a treasure to us dear ... both the stories are going well ....somewhere I feel nice about Tulasi and Joyal than Krishna and Krishna may bebecause of grandma ..lol..

    Diya might tell Joyal's name and Veni and Krishna not going to meet again ...waiting ...
     
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    aarthi28 Platinum IL'ite

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    Dear Iniya
    Though I don't miss to read all your episodes when it is posted, I could not write my fb immediately through Mobile. You always mesmerize me with your writings which makes us feel things happening near by around our society and you always make us feel go back to our olden days,! Ah, nostalgic and my sincere thanks for that. This would be a three generation story i suppose and each piece of your work is unique. Kudos to your writing skills. Awaiting eagerly for next episode.
     
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    woww thank you for extra episodes which are very good...thank you dear... but monday,tuesday episodes...???? penalty episodes we need....:tongueout::tongueout:
     
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