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hi friends,
these were the thoughts that went in my head, when i saw the trees shedding their leaves during fall!

In winter,
when we are layered with clothes
you are not

But in summer,
we are dressed just to cover ourselves
you are fully layered with
leaves, flowers and fruits.

What a contrast!

Sriniketan

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Sriniketan, Nov 17, 2007

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Good observation, Srini. Never struck my mind.

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Thanks Nivedi for the FB, i am overwhelmed!

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Sriniketan said: ↑

hi friends,
these were the thoughts that went in my head, when i saw the trees shedding their leaves during fall!

In winter,
when we are layered with clothes
you are not

But in summer,
we are dressed to cover ourselves
you are fully layered with
leaves, flowers and fruits.

What a contrast!

Sriniketan
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hey sriniketan,
Good observation...........
To add on...

I watch the barren trees,
waiting for the sun and light

Spotted New leaves
say times heals everything
and life start new............

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Thanks Shanthi for considering this as a poem and answering with such a beautiful one with philosophy in it!

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Hi Sriniketan,
I had written a similar poem a few years back. I dont remember whether I have posted it in this site. So for the benefit of all those who love poems, I shall contribute it in a fresh thread. After reading a few posts of yours, I have a feeling that our thoughts match!
A nice short and crisp poem.
Regards
Malathi

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hello srinik...

anrorunaal ilay porthi
moodikondaan...
kulirukkum
indru aaday neivathukkum uthaviya marangal...
.
veyililo viyarthu viruviruthu...
thaagathil vaada
oru nizhalavathu theda
pachai pasel ena
poothu kulungum marangal

nizhalum koduthu
mudinthaal panchu meththai pol
pookkal virithu...
contrast illayo? enthan manathil?
enrendrum manithanukku thunaiyay....

sathya

srinik... inru oru variyil kooda kavithai ezhuthugiraargal
nichayam unnul olinthirukkirathu
oru azhagaana iyarkayay nesikkum
kavi...
valarthuvidu...uram pottu neer ootri
mada madavenu
poothu kulungattum
manamaana varigal

sathya

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Thanks Malathi for the response.
Please do post your poem for the benefit of ilites reading me!
Great minds think alike, isn't it,... me..:confused2: , great, no way!

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Thanks Sathya for the response to this thread.
I like your contrast much better than mine!

Your replies gives me the 'orum and water' for my thoughts!
thanks for encouraging me in this regard which can be seen in my coming posts :hatsoff

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hi srinik,
Nice observation. good one and a nice add on shanthi
uma

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