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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Sriniketan, Nov 17, 2007.

  1. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    hi friends,
    these were the thoughts that went in my head, when i saw the trees shedding their leaves during fall!

    In winter,
    when we are layered with clothes
    you are not

    But in summer,
    we are dressed just to cover ourselves
    you are fully layered with
    leaves, flowers and fruits.

    What a contrast!

    Sriniketan
     
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  2. Nivedi

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    Good observation, Srini. Never struck my mind.
     
  3. Sriniketan

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    Thanks Nivedi for the FB, i am overwhelmed!

    sriniketan
     
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    hey sriniketan,
    Good observation...........
    To add on...

    I watch the barren trees,
    waiting for the sun and light

    Spotted New leaves
    say times heals everything
    and life start new............
     
  5. Sriniketan

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    Thanks Shanthi for considering this as a poem and answering with such a beautiful one with philosophy in it!

    sriniketan
     
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    Hi Sriniketan,
    I had written a similar poem a few years back. I dont remember whether I have posted it in this site. So for the benefit of all those who love poems, I shall contribute it in a fresh thread. After reading a few posts of yours, I have a feeling that our thoughts match!
    A nice short and crisp poem.
    Regards
    Malathi
     
  7. sathya

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    hello srinik...

    anrorunaal ilay porthi
    moodikondaan...
    kulirukkum
    indru aaday neivathukkum uthaviya marangal...
    .
    veyililo viyarthu viruviruthu...
    thaagathil vaada
    oru nizhalavathu theda
    pachai pasel ena
    poothu kulungum marangal

    nizhalum koduthu
    mudinthaal panchu meththai pol
    pookkal virithu...
    contrast illayo? enthan manathil?
    enrendrum manithanukku thunaiyay....

    sathya

    srinik... inru oru variyil kooda kavithai ezhuthugiraargal
    nichayam unnul olinthirukkirathu
    oru azhagaana iyarkayay nesikkum
    kavi...
    valarthuvidu...uram pottu neer ootri
    mada madavenu
    poothu kulungattum
    manamaana varigal

    sathya
     
  8. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Malathi for the response.
    Please do post your poem for the benefit of ilites reading me!
    Great minds think alike, isn't it,... me..:confused2: , great, no way!

    sriniketan
     
  9. Sriniketan

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    Thanks Sathya for the response to this thread.
    I like your contrast much better than mine!

    Your replies gives me the 'orum and water' for my thoughts!
    thanks for encouraging me in this regard which can be seen in my coming posts :hatsoff

    sriniketan
     
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    hi srinik,
    Nice observation. good one and a nice add on shanthi
    uma
     

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