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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Anandchitra, Mar 7, 2008.

  1. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Dear AC,

    Good poem.....looks like you have incorporated Gita teachings also here ......and a good thought that you have to let HIM lead our life.....just like Malspie has said. Very good work...keep it on!Bow



    Dear Malspie,

    Good one about the Kite and Life! Enjoyed your fb to AC!
     
  2. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Bhargavi
    You always appreciate me and have something nice to say. Remember the first time i wrote i told you i was nervous about posting it. so thanks for the kind words.
     
  3. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Sudha
    Thanks. Really your words of encouragement means a lot.Thank You.
     
  4. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    DAMN GOOD AC,
    that was one hell of an emotion put together, yeah u have come a long way dear, go on please decorate here with all your poems more..sunkan
     
  5. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Dear Sundari
    Very nice of you and very kind too. Thanks.
     
  6. Vysan

    Vysan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear AC,

    That was a real nice one... Great lines filed with emotions.... when you go thro testing times, Spouse stand by you.... that is great shows the love and affection....

    Let the kingdom of love flourish...

    Veda
     
  7. Kamla

    Kamla IL Hall of Fame

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    My dear Anandchitra,

    I must admit that I have a big guilty conscience....Much as I wish to read all your contributions, I am unable to do so. I know, Chitvish will never like my reasoning...lack of time, too busy to attend to everything...She would never understand, she is amazing and I am just not that quick or good at multi tasking :cry:
    Believe you me, the loss is totally mine..
    This poem was so soft and smooth. So very thoughtful. It has both respect and love intertwined in some simple words.
    After reading it, I look at my hubby...did I miss out on something?! Yes, he is adorable and thanks to you, I should never forget that in my haste to get on with life:))
    Others too must have felt the same for this has been placed in the FP forum, no wonder!
    Congrats!

    L, Kamla
     
  8. Malathijagan

    Malathijagan Silver IL'ite

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    Hello Anandchitra!
    That was a beautiful poem. I read the earlier one too-'Am I selfish'.(Sorry I am not sure if I have written the title correctly, but that too was dedicated to your hubby.)
    Your hubby must be really fortunate to get such a loving wife! Or is it the other way round? Both have been blessed by God. This poem is right out of your heart. Great writing. Keep it up.
    Regards,
    Malathi
     
  9. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    My dear most Chithu sis :kiss:kiss

    "Is that something you did, or something you said, I WONDER why" ?? I echo these words of A.R.Rahman from "Pray for me brother Album"... I sit back to re-read your poem and ascertain that IL has got another promising Poet who speaks her mind what ever the case may be !! :bowdown:clap:clap:hatsoff

    My hearty congratulations to you to win the Finest Posts for this creation has touched almost all the ILites and the Divine himself too !! All that the Supreme has to do is whisper in the ears of our moderators the same !!Big Laugh:clap Am sure he will as he heard this kutty sis of yours whisper in his senses :):)

    A little that this amateur could add to your post sis !!


    "a waiting
    much awaited,
    a waiting
    bloomed with efforts,
    a waiting
    blossomed with thoughts,
    a waiting
    filled with prosperity,

    a life to portray
    the creative force,
    has turned out
    to etch your cogency,
    a life to showcase
    the Supreme intellect,
    has angled in
    to match the wavelength of yours !!


    Regards with Love
    RamyaVaradharajan

    NB: My :hiyato jeeju as he should be the happiest by now :)
     
    Last edited: Mar 9, 2008
  10. Meenaneelakantan

    Meenaneelakantan Bronze IL'ite

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    Dear Chitu ma'am

    By this

    You mean this

    Or this?????:confused2::confused2::confused2:

    Enjoyed reading your waiting!!BowBow:hatsoff:hatsoff:bowdown
     

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