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Waiting on the threshold

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Anandchitra, Mar 7, 2008.

  1. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    I stood in the threshold
    watching God
    my eyes and heart
    yearned to be near God

    So I asked My God
    What can I do
    so I can always
    bw with You

    God said to me with kindness
    in His eyes, My Child
    You have to finish
    all your bad karmas
    and then come back to ME

    How can this be done My God
    I asked and wondered
    To which He replied with Love
    I will send all my angels
    to give enough trouble
    that you can bless them with love

    How would I ever handle
    all the problems My God
    for I am all alone.
    Dear Child He said
    I will always be with you my dear
    so Never Fear till
    you come back and reach me near

    When I wake up to see my husband
    I know at that moment
    God did keep up his word
    And is walking with me every step
    And for every problem I have to face
    I do so with love and kindness
    so as to move closer a step to God.
     
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  2. malspie

    malspie Platinum IL'ite

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    Ac Dearie!!

    You have come a long way from garage cleaning!!!

    Wonderfully penned poem with in depth meaning. :bowdown:bowdown.

    We can be close to God, if we give the threads of our life to him instead of playing with it. When he flies the kite called 'life' he will save it from being 'cut' at the wrong time. He will pull the kite away to a safer zone and always keep an eye on the kite called 'life'. We humans always like to fly our own kite and call him when its torn and fallen on the floor or call him when its being threatened to be torn or again when we do not know how to fly it anymore.

    Good poem sweetheart.
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Anandchitra
    That was a beautiful poemBow
    God sending the angels to trouble us in order to complete our karmas and also going to help us to face these problem................super ya really good one.
     
  4. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    AC,

    Good one. God knows how much we can tackle..and he also stands behind us to help us if we look like we are going to fall from the pressure....

    I always quote this few verses..dont say theinji pona record (don't say i am repeating like a lp that has gone waste from over usage...)

    thunbamodu inbam kalandadthey prapanjam.
    veyilliye nizhalil inbamum undoh...


    along with happiness sorrow is blended in this world.
    Unless you are out in the sun, the value of shade is not realised....

    Forgot to mention, Good to know the effect of the Gita Classes.
     
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  5. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Shanthi
    To see you reply to mine is a true priveledge for me. You have truly made my DAY.
    I will not keeyanja record bec thats what i amtoo...

    Aruna dear
    Thanks for the very kind words.
     
  6. Oviya

    Oviya Silver IL'ite

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    Dear AC,

    That was so touching......The highlight.......Mention about DH......

    I have no words to say...

    Would like to quote an example here....In the obituary to writer Sujatha a fan of him wrote....

    'Poi vaarungal vadhiyaare, anaithirkkum nandri'....It attracted my DH and me more than anything....As everybody knows everything about him.....your poem speaks itself.....the same way...

    I have no words to say....Bow

    Love,
    Oviya.
     
  7. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Oviya my young friend
    Twice you said you have no words to say. Inspite of that fact you have conveyed more than I could have. I appreciate your kind words and Thank You.
     
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    Sindhuja Silver IL'ite

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    Dear AC,
    Nice poem yaar!
    I liked your previous poem too (How selfish can I get).
    You are an all rounder!


    regards,
     
  9. Anandchitra

    Anandchitra IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Sindhu. Your encouragement does mean a lot to me.
     
  10. Sriniketan

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    AC,
    Very nice one reminding us that only after bad karma vanishes, we can near God and for that God will help us and we had to spot Him. It is true.

    sriniketan
     

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