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Villain's Poem

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by SuiDhaaga, Jul 14, 2021.

  1. SuiDhaaga

    SuiDhaaga Platinum IL'ite

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    I said I am sorry
    But it doesn't mean its true
    I said I am sorry
    It doesn't mean I like you

    I tricked you and got
    What I wanted
    You thought you were
    Finally happy
    Your joy duly flaunted

    You stupid fool you fell for my tricks
    You stupid food you are sick sick sick
    Your family wanted to you get married
    They didn't want to see you old and harried

    Instead you chose me rather than the local boys
    But you were just a cog in my ploy

    You thought you would get justice
    You thought you would see vengeance
    But your so-called-god is on my side
    And will not be affected
    By any of your penance

    I am not sorry
    I will get married soon
    I will have a wife
    Who is younger and prettier
    Than you

    I am not sorry
    It is too late
    I am not sorry
    Your desperate family
    Sealed your fate

    Scene from Disney's Frozen

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  2. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan IL Hall of Fame

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    It is all bachelor’s woes. A spinster (bachelorette) perhaps see through the mind of a young man rejected for his alleged deficiencies turns confident to discover his partner for life.

    The mood and place beautifully set with embellishments. But then from where he imagines food to be sick sick sick?

    Anyways I grant full marks for the structure and body.
    Regards.
     
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    LOL, it is not "food", it is "fool".

    It was a typo as I was rushing on the keyboard.


    Thank you for your wonderful words. I glad you appreciated the poem.
     

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