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Unnoticed, Unseen!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sureshmiyer, Mar 16, 2010.

  1. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    I woke up one day
    Unnoticed, unseen
    The sparrows were chirping
    Did not mind me between

    I poked them gently
    The sparrows got scared
    Seeing them fly
    I went mad

    I ran out into the streets
    Naked and free
    Hurled pebbles on passersby
    Watched them flee with glee

    I felt like a king
    In this blind men’s paradise
    Shocking poor fellows at will
    Making fun of their cries

    I was shaken hard
    By someone I could not see
    I rubbed my eyes
    Could see only darkness around me

    It was my mother
    She put me on her lap
    Tears filled my eyes
    As I went into recap

    I wished my dreams were true
    I could see the world go blind
    Why O Lord,
    You robbed away my sight
    What was my fault,
    You made me Blind
     
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  2. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    The poem is about the dream of a blind boy!
    He could see none
    He wants to become invisible himself

    regards
    suresh
     
  3. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Very sad to read it Suresh! Could understand his anger towards society, which teases him and towards God his creator, he has every right to ask that question.

    sriniketan
     
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  4. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    hi Sriniketan

    thanks for your views
    sometimes life is very unjust and seems to be too cruel

    regards
    suresh
     

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