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Ufante Rishton Ke Beech Panpti Dil Ki Pyaas

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  1. sona147

    sona147 New IL'ite

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    Main Character:

    Name: Ram Upadhyay.
    Age: 40 years.
    Height: 5’10”
    Complexion: wheatish.
    Caste: Pandit.
    Citizenship : Indian.
    Status: single.
    Work: Bussiness man(CEO of multinational companies).

    Kehte hain jaisa naam waisa kaam..

    Ram ek bahut hi sadhran aur lagan se apna kaam karne wala insaan hai..aaj Ram ke issi vyvhar
    aur issi lagan ke kaaran aaj woh ek multinationalist ban saka hai..

    TDH (tall-dark-handsome), ke quality aur kaam mein shidata hone ke kaaran ladkiyaan Ram se kaafi inspired raha karti thi..
    Ram thehre bade hi simple aur down-to-earth insaan..kaam ke maamle mein behadd strict aur Ram ke saamne koi bhi
    bahana banana kisi bhi employee ke liye koi aasan kaam hargiz nahi tha..

    Ram ka favourite employee:

    Name: Rajesh Yadav.
    Age: 38 years.
    Height: 5’7”
    Complexion: Fair.
    Caste: Yadav’s.
    Citizenship: Indian.
    Status: married with many extra-marital affairs.
    Work: Vice-President of one of Ram’s first company.

    Rajesh apne kaam mein bahut hi dedicated rehta hai..
    Ram ne jab apni pehli company kholi thi toh Rajesh (jo ki Ram ka school time friend hai) ne Ram ko bahut
    support diya tha aur issi ke chalet dono ache dost toh the hi par ab dono office mein bhi ache saathi bann gaye hain..

    Rajesh ke swabhaav school days se hi aaiyaash kisam ka tha.. usne Ram se aaj tak school se lekar ussi abhi chal rahi neeji
    zindagi sabh kuch share kiya hai..lekin Ram par aaj tak Rajesh ki kusangati ka koi bura assar nahi pada..
    Rajesh ke bacche nahi hain kyun ki rajesh ke hi gupt angoon mein problem hai..aur uski wife abhi bhi ek dum kamsan kali hai..
    par fir bhi rajesh ki bahar muh maarne ki buri aadat hai..

    Ram apne usoolo ka pucca tha usse koi bhi conditions tod nahi sakti thi usse apne jeevan mein kya karna hai yeh usse bakhoobi pata tha..

    Rajesh ne kabhi Ram ko badalne ki koi bhi koshish nahi kari chahte hue bhi Rajesh kabhi Ram ke mann ki baatein nahi jaan pata tha..

    Neeji jindagi mein jitna saral tha Ram..kaam mein utna hi taej aur farrat tha.. deals sign karna project file karna Ram ke liye bahut hi aasaan kaam tha..

    Aaj Ram bahut hi paise wala aur Bharat ka naami grami insaan bann gaya tha.. Ram ka naam ke charity funds chalte the,
    kissi inauguration ke liye Ram ko log bade hi mann se invite karte the..

    Ram bahut hi popular aur smart tha logon ka ideal tha Ram..
    lekin aaj tak koi bhi Ram ke mann ki baatein nahi jaan paya tha ki..
    usne aaj tak shaadi kyun nahi ki thi..??
    inti shahurat hone ke baavjood bhi koi bhi khaas shaunk naa rakhna..??
    Ram ka neeji zindagi mein itna reserve hona.. in sabh ka raaz aaj tak kisi ko bhi nahi pata tha..

    January 26th 2013
    10:00 am..

    Rajesh: sirji.. good morning.. aaj office mein kaise??

    Ram: yaar ghar par kya karta i love office you knw naa..

    Rajesh: Ram hadd karte ho bhai 26 jan ko bhi boss office aa raha hai.. employees kya karenge..
    mujhe chutti chahiye dost isliye aaj office aaya hunn..

    Ram: Rajesh..yaar woh cannada wale project ka kya hua??

    Rajesh: well aaj client ki requirements clear hojayengi then we will start working on it..

    Ram: hmmmm.. waise rajesh Thomas chutti bahut leta hai..

    ... ... THOMAS.. ...
    Ram ka PA hai..
    jo lagatar chuttiyan leta rehta hai..

    Ram Thomas se behad pareshaan hai.. Ram employees ko fire karne ke favour mein kabhi bhi nahi
    hota hai lekin this man Thomas ne Ram ki naak mein damm karke rakha hai..

    Rajesh: well sir dekh lijiye aap kahen toh koi naya employee dekhun aapki PA ki post ke liye..

    Ram: haan Rajesh Thomas ko convince karke usse hamari network company mein shift kardete hain
    uske liye mobile network NOVA NETWORKS mein ek achi si job dekh kar usse wahan shift karva do usse naukri se mat nikaalo..
    you knw naa I don’t favour all this..

    Rajesh: yes sir! Well sir MAA kaisi hain unki tabiyat kaisi hai??

    Ram: MAA thik hain kal hi london se illaj karva ke Mumbai laut rahin hain i hope now she’ll be able to walk good..

    . . . . RAM KI MAA (Sharda Devi). . . .

    Age : 50 years.
    Complexion: very Fair.

    Ram ki MAA sharda devi jo Ram se behad pyar karti hai Ram bhi apni MAA se bahut pyar karta hai isliye
    usne apne chote bhaai ke saath maa ko London unke jodon ke dard ke illaj ke liye bheja tha..

    Sharda devi ki saalon se ek hi rathh chal rahi thi ki Ram jaise taise shaadi karle.. lekin Ram thehra saadi
    ke gyaan se ek dum anjaan aur kabhi shaadi nahi karna chahta tha..

    . . . . RAM KA BHAAI (Vikram). . . .

    Vikram bada hi suljha hua inssan hai lekin aaj ki chal rahi teaj duniya se sur se sur milata hua bindass yuvak bhi..
    bhaai ki behadd kadar karne wala yeh yuvak jeevan ke sabhi rasson ko chakhna chahta hai..aur shaadi karne ke
    bilkul khilaaf nahi hai..

    Vikram ne Mumbai university se engg kari hai aur ab apne bade bhaai ka haath batana chahta hai..aur issi ke
    chalte apne bhaai Ram ke dost aur vise-president Rajesh ke haath ke neeche training le raha hai..

    Achanak Rajesh ka desk phone bajta hai aur Rajesh uthata hai..

    Rajesh: HELLO??

    Other side: Hello is this ARC Solutions??

    Rajesh: yes who are you??

    Other side: I’m Neha Pal and I want a job in your company Mr. Bhaweja suggested me your company
    and even gave this number..

    . . . . ARJUN BHAWEJA (Ram ka client aur neeji dost) . . .

    Name: ARJUN BHAWEJA.

    Age: 35 years.
    Height : 5’8”
    Complexion: very fair.
    Caste: mona Punjabi.
    Citizenship: cannadian.
    Status: married but still seeking and dating.
    Work: owner of a company.

    Ram ne apni PA Thomas se ho rahi problem Arjun se share ki thi aur Arjun ne Neha ko Ram ki company
    suggest kari hai for the job..

    Arjun ki khoobsurat biwi hai aur woh dono Canada mein hi rehte hain..they have a year old kid..

    Rajesh: ohh well here is the email address please mail me your resume I’ll forward it to Ram sir..

    Neha: okay fine please give me..

    Rajesh: ARC@SOL.COM

    Neha: thanku sir..

    Rajesh: (after hanging up ram se) sir kisi Neha ka phone tha Arjun Bhaweja ne suggest kiya usse to call us..

    Ram: hmmmmm well thik hai waqt kamm hai aur agar uska resume appropriate lage to hum hire kar lenge Neha ko..

    1:00 pm

    Rajesh: chaliye sir lunch karne..

    Ram: yes! Chalo.. waise aaj jyada kaam nahi hai ek kaam karte hain lets move home..

    Rajesh: arre waah sir chaliye issi bahane aap Ritu (rajesh ki wife ) se bhi mil lenge..
    Ram: nahi rajesh I mean you go your way and I mine..

    Rajesh: come on sir it’s a holiday I’ll inform my wife that I’m soon coming home aap kaa ghar aana
    surprise rehne dete hain nahi toh who thodi formal ho gayegi aapke saamne..

    Ram: well rajesh yeh thik nahi rahege Ritu ko batado..

    Rajesh : nahi sir nahi to woh baat hi nahi karegi sir thodi sharmili hai ritu..

    Ram: well mujhe kya pata ladkiyon ke bare main chalo thik hai after all she is your wife..

    Apne office bags pack karke ram aur rajesh..dono apni apni car mein rajesh ke ghar ke liye nikalte
    hain as drivers are on leave National holiday jo hai..ram fir vahin se ghar aajayega soch kar apni car
    mein hi rajesh ke ghar ke liye usse follow karne laga..

    Takreeban 2:30 pm

    Rajesh Ritu ko inform kar chukka tha ki who ghar aa raha hai..

    Ritu aaj bade hi mood mein thi aur rajesh ka besabri se intejaar kar rahi thi..

    Ram aur rajesh ghar pahunch gaye..
    Ram ne dekha ki rajesh ka ghar acha khasa bungalow hai aur well maintained garden jis mein ek jhoola
    hai hawa se hil raha hai.. gate par guards tainaad hain for the security.. ram gaadi se utar kar rajesh ki gaadi
    ke pass jahan woh abhi abhi gaadi se utra tha wahan pahunch gaya..

    Rajesh: aaiye sir andar chalte hain..

    Ram: haan?? Haan hann..(ghar ko dekhne mein khoya hua tha..thoda hosh mein aate hue kehta hai..)
    Rajesh yaar pehli baar kissi married couple ke ghar is tarha jaa raha hunn thoda ajeeb sa lag raha hai..
    ek kaam kar ritu bhabhi ko bata de ki mein bhi saath aa raha hunn..

    Rajesh: boss ghar toh aa hi gaye hain naa ab andar chal kar hi bata dete hain ki aap bhi saath aayen hain..

    Rajesh is baat se bekhabar tha ki Ritu aaj bahut dino baad thode alag mood mein aur uska besabri se intezaar
    kar rahi hai.. Rajesh aur Ram car ki chaabiyan guards ko car park karne ke liye dete hain aur dono khud paidal
    chal kar gate aur ghar ke beech ki doori ko poora karte hain..

    Rajesh door bell bajata hai..
    Ritu door bell sunte hai seedhiyoon se bhaagti hui neeche hall mein aati hai aur ghatt se darwaaza kholte hi
    darwaze se 4 kadam bahar aati hai aur apni baahon ka haar rajesh ke gale mein daal kar usse hug kar leti hai..

    Ritu ne bahut hi sexy gown pehni thi aur rajesh ke seene se lag gahi..Ritu ki gown itni patli hai ki usse pehnna aur naa pehenna ek hi samaan hai..

    Ritu hug toh kar leti hai rajesh ritu ke hug ko bahi komalta se uski kamar par haath rakh kar sweekaar bhi karta
    hai lekin thodi hi daer baad jab ritu ki nazar Ram oar padti hai toh woh sharam se paani paani ho jaati hai..

    Ram ne aisa nazaara apni poori zindagi mein pehli baar dekha tha aur dekhte hi usse bechaini aur ajeebsi garmi ka ehsaas hone laga..

    Rajesh: (condition ko sambhaalte hue) aaa...aa.. aammm..
    Aaiye sir andar aaiye..(ritu ko aankhen dikhte hue andar jaane ka ishaara karte hue..)

    Ram: nahi rajesh mein soch raha tha ki mein fir kabhi tumhare ghar aata.. actually woh tender aane wala tha
    client side se toh thoda kaam yaad aa gaya..

    Rajesh: arre sir itne saalon mein pehli baar ghar aayen hain thoda baithiye naa..

    Ritu rajesh ke aankhein dekhaane par andar bhaag agi thi aur ab ritu ne ek halki wali chiffon ki saree pehen li hai..

    Rajesh: sir baithiye naa.. (jor se)ritu... sir ke liye khana lavao sir aaj yahin par khaana kha kar jayenge..

    Ram: rajesh.. yaar itni takleef kyun utha rahe ho..its fine yaar..

    Ritu khaana dining table par sajate hue Scotti hai.. “rajesh pagal ho gaye hain kya aise kaise apne BOSS ko ghar
    le aayen aur mujhe inform bhi nahi kiya..woh toh acha hai ki meine poora lunch banaya tha nahi toh rajesh khud ki
    naak toh katvate saath mein poora khana banane mein meri jaan nikal jaati.. par mein bhi kitni buddhu hoon aaj kya
    hogaza tha mujhe kuyun meine aise kapde pehen liye..sir kya soch rahe honge mere baare mein..**** yaar kahin inki
    naukri par koi aanch naa aaye.. nahi toh yeh toh mujhe kaccha hi khaa jayenge..”

    Ritu: suniye khana lag chuka hai..dinig table par hi aajaiye..

    Rajesh: haan thik hai..(thode kadak swar mein) chaliye sir..

    Ram: (thoda atpata mehsus kar raha hai..aur kehta hai) haan chalo..

    Dono dining table par aakar aamne saamne baith jaate hain..ritu dono ki pate laga rahi hai aur rajesh ke khayalon ko
    haal hi hui ghatna ke ki vajah se bhaanpne ki koshish karti hai lekin rajesh ka poora dhayan Ram ko serve karne mein hai..
    Ritu ne phir Ram ke vichaaron ko bhaanpne ki koshish kar aur usse Ram ke vyavhaar mein rookha pan aur sharam nazar aai..
    ritu nazar hi nazar main ram ki nazar se nazar milane ki koshish karti hai lekin Ram khaane mein magan hai..Ritu koshish mein
    lagi hai ki kisi tarha ek baar Ram ritu ki ore dekhe toh ritu ko kam se kam samajh mein aaye ki Ram soch kya raha hai ritu ke baare main..

    Bahut koshish ke bavjood bhi Ram ki nazarein Ritu se nahi mil pai..rajesh aur Ram ka khana kha kar ho gaya hai..

    Ritu: (rajesh se)dessert lenge..

    Rajesh: (roothe hue sur mein) haan sir ko serve karo..

    Ritu: (ram se) sir dessert..

    Ram: (ritu se bade hi komal swar mein) nahi bhabhi ji thank you mein lunch mein dessert nahi leta..

    Ritu ko komalta se diya hua Ram ka jawab acha lagta hai aur uske chere par ek muskaan si chaa jaati hai..
    thodi daer baad Ram apni nazar uthata hai..

    Ritu rajesh ko dessert serve karne mein busy hai Ram ki nazar ritu ke chehe par hai aur rajesh dessert ko dekh raha hai..
    ritu eka ek nazar uthati hai aur Ram ko apni ore dekhte paati hai..ritu ram se nazar mita hi nazar sharam se serious bhaav
    ke saath hata leti hai..mahaul thodi daer pehle hue ritu ke kapde wale vakyaat ke baad jo garam hogaya tha ab thoda thanda
    hota nazar aa raha hai..ritu aur ram ek doose se nazarein milene ke baad thoda halka mehsus kar rahe the..

    Rajesh: sir khana kaisa laga??

    Ram: dost khaana bahut badhiya tha jyada kha liya aaj..

    Rajesh: thank you sir..

    Ram: thanku tumhe nahi bhabhiji ko kehna chahiye..she is a good cook..

    Rajesh: (thode gusse mein ritu ki ore dekhta hai..) hmmm yes sir she is a good cook..

    Ritu ko aaj darr hai ki rajesh aaj usse bahut dantega aur jis tarha 2 saal pehle rajesh ne ritu par haath uthaya tha
    kahin aaj rajesh fir wahi naa kar de..ritu darri hui hai..aur yahi sabh sochte sochte ritu ke haath se table se joothe
    bartan uthate samay ek kaanch ki glass neeche gir jaati hai..ritu hosh mein aati hai aur chaaro taraf shaanti chaai hui hai..

    Rajesh: (jo kaafi daer se sayyam rakhe hue hau ritu ko dante hue..) dhayan kahan rehta hai tumhara samajh mein nahi
    aata hai ki ghar mein koi mehmaan aaya hai..pehle toh aisi ghinoni harkat karke poori naak katadi meri aur ab glass fod
    di nusaan hi nuksaan karna ata hai tumhe..koi kaam ki nahi ho tum..jao apne kaure main le jao apni yeh manhus shakal
    meri nazroon ke saamne se..

    Ritu rote hue seedhiyoon ko ore bhaagti hai tabhi Ram beech mein bol padta hai..

    Ram: ritu bhabhi..rukiye..

    Yeh sunkar ritu ruk jaati hai..

    Ram: (rajesh se) rajesh tum itne krur kabse bangaye yaar?? Galti hi kya hai bhabhiji ki??

    Rajesh: yaar Ram tum mere boss ho tumhari respect nahi hai kya usse kaise tumhare saamne aa gai??

    Ram: mein tera boss baad mein rajesh pehle mein tera dost hoon shayad tu bhool gaya hai ki galti teri hai..

    Rajesh: sir aap ritu ki side le rahen hain..?? aapko meri galti nazar aati hai uski nahi.. pareshaan ho gaya hoo is aurat se mein..

    Ram: rajesh shayad tum bhool gaye ki meine tumse kaha tha ki tum ritu bhabhi ko inform kardo ki mein bhi tumhare saath
    aa raha hoon but tumne meri baat hi kahan suni ab bhabhiji par chilla rahe ho.. woh kitna chahti hain tumhe surparise plan
    kiya tha unhone meine aa kar aaj sabh kuch spoil kar diya.. lekin usse jyada mujhe is baat ka bura lag raha hai rajesh ki
    tum kine non-understanding insaan ho..

    Rajesh: but sir..

    Ram: (rajesh ko kehne nahi deta hai..) par ek ehsaan kardo please atlest mere saamne ritu bhabhi ko is tarha se insult mat karo..
    (Itna keh kar ram ritu ki ore badhta hai aur kehta hai..) bhabhiji i’m sorry for spoilling your surprise and your mood..

    Ritu: sir aapne mujhe samjha yeh bahut badi baat hai mere liye nahi toh toh apne aapse kabhi nazarein hi nahi mila paati..
    aap sorry naa kahen..sirji..

    Itna keh kar ram wahan se nikal jata hai aur rajesh gusse mein beizzat ho kar apne kamre mein chala jaata hai..

    ****
    Aage jaane ke liye padhte rahiye..
     
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  2. sona147

    sona147 New IL'ite

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    Please post comments on my story and let me know if you want to read more.. Then only i shall write further and update the posts..
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Sona

    If you had written it in English you would have got many comments. Here many of them find it difficult in reading hindi.
    Even I could read only half but will surely come back and read it fully.
    You have written it really good. The story is also interesting.
     
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    ASHWINRAJ Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Sona,

    I second Aruna.
    I dont know Hindi,in that case there are lots of readers who will feel comfortable if the story is in English.
    Waiting eagerly to read it in English.
    Enjoy your stay here in IL.
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Sona

    Apne bahut hi khubsoorthi sey yeh kahani liki hai.
    Hum apkey aagley bhag key liya rukanygay.
     
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    sona147 New IL'ite

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    well Thanku all of you for posting your replies i shall try writing this story in English and start it with a new Title soon..
     

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