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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Vidhyathan, Sep 15, 2010.

  1. Vidhyathan

    Vidhyathan Senior IL'ite

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    How long we've been waiting
    Masking the tension
    Saying everything was fine
    Though at the back of the heart
    A doubt lingered
    With a big question
    Is all well?

    Chit-chats with other moms
    And grand moms
    Offered no peace
    But only a crease
    Still with adamance
    We decided to be patient
    And let him grow at his own pace.

    Then it shook a little
    To make our hearts tremble
    He crossed another milestone
    In a relaxed manner
    As he willed
    Now we got the answer
    'All is well'.
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one Vidhyathan. You brought out the expectation and the hope a woman has, in each and every stage of her child's growth in your lines. -rgs
     
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  3. Sriniketan

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    You brought it out well, Vidhya..the emotions we go throw when we look up at our children.
    As my eldest has gone out for University...our emotions still linger at the back of our heart.

    sriniketan
     

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