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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jan 25, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Along the banks of that river,
    On dusky gray winter mornings,
    Had you walked, you would never
    Forget that voice that brings

    A melancholic feeling that pushes you
    Towards those memories of your past
    When you felt happy and sad within few
    Seconds, yet wish staying there till last.

    The girl who was of a medium height
    And not so sharper features, yet
    Made it up with her smile and gait
    And curly hair made it hard to forget.

    On days when it rained early she would
    Bring an umbrella that was cute like her.
    I followed her like a puppy then and did
    Not have anything else that bothered.

    Most of us would have crossed that stage,
    Hoping that we would be like that always.
    It gets stored deep and turns as vintage
    Memories that we reminisce these days.

    Spring comes but only once in our lives
    And we cross it without knowing this nice
    Season won't come again and later wish
    That we should be there after we missed.



     
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  2. Sai3A21

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    Spring comes but only once in our lives
    And we cross it without knowing this nice

    - loved these 2 lines the most... rgsrinivasan garu, one more wonderful poetry from you
    :thumbsup
     
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    Thanks Prerna, for your appreciation and quoting the lines you loved most.
    All of us who crossed that age, long to go back. Isn't it?
    -rgs
     
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    Loved it year.......
     
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    Yes definitely. But I feel that the beauty of those memories lies in tht they cant be revisited... If those days were able to be revisited, then they would not be tht beautiful as they were!!!
     
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    Thanks Sonali222, for your appreciation. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     
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    Well said Prerna. Thanks again for another feedback. -rgs
     
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    my pleasure rgsrinivasan garu :thankyou2:
     
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    Just a small request Prerna Madam. Please address me just as 'rgs'. Can you? Happy to receive many feedback from you today for this post. Thanks. -rgs
     
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    oh sure rgs :)
     

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