My mind relive those painful moments Time has stood still for me The rest of the scene has moved It has been a year This very place had a look of fear In my arms withering dear <o> </o> The splatter of the rain Your thoughts I bring back in vain When I lost you in pain Now what did I gain <o> </o> Will walk to your grave My mind is now brave Journey ahead will pave For you a smile I would save <o> </o> Oh! My child you wait for me With extended arm I see A time will come when I would be free Our soul will mingle and freeze <o> </o> <o> </o> <o> </o> sunkan...
Awesome dear Sundari..so touching..very beautiful..Will definetly win competition..coming in late but i'm catching up and really glad i caught this..keep going woman..
" Time has stood still for me The rest of the scene has moved" Loved that Ms. Sundari. Frozen time has been well phrased. And the last para conveys the meaning of soulmate, at death. Simple and heart warming.
sunkan, Good one. Though not exactly in the same lines....... here is my try.hope you approve? time is a great healer they say I still feel raw inside sometimes though it is more than a year when you left to places not so near The grasses and the plants on your grave tell me <o></o> times does not wait and there is new gain for every loss if and only if I see in the correct places I am learning to smile, without starting to cry without feeling bad while remembering you true, time is a great healer
hi mam, God's gift of forgetting the pain and moving on with times has been very beautifully described. Regards Sri
dear shanthi lovely, but i wanted u to use some other theme something different fromwhat i thought, it neednt be the same but something too unique like meeting a friend as u pass through, or may be remembering or waiting for your hubby to come over at the other end of the road and u see him walking towards u with that knowing smile and all,, i still loved the poem
sunkan and shanvy, A good use of words both of you that touched my heart sooooooo very much.My mind was flooded with the memories of my lovely daughter i lost three years ago. "I AM LEARNING TO SMILE.......' How wrong I was. I had thought that i have overcome my grief ,the pain only a mother can feel on losing her child!!!!! "MY CHILD YOU WAIT FOR ME............."My thoughts and my feeling ,you have given words to it.Thank you both .I wish good luck to you to win the competition.GOD BLESS YOU.