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They Say Marriages Are Made In Heaven

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Bhargavi03, Sep 11, 2015.

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  1. Sep 11, 2015 #11
    katochsimi

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    wow...cute short story..
    but in real i dont think it is possible for such a handsome boy to wait for so long ;-)
     
    katochsimi, Sep 11, 2015
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  2. Sep 11, 2015 #12
    kcb

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    Nice story Bhargavi....
     
    kcb, Sep 11, 2015
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  3. Sep 11, 2015 #13
    curiousgals78

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    wow. nice story. excellent style of writing too.
     
    curiousgals78, Sep 11, 2015
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  4. Sep 12, 2015 #14
    Salaswathi

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    So the moral of the story is ?
    Look at the darn photo, when parents offer one ?
    nice story. It also had the scope for tragedy...... Girl falls in love with married Viswa' and ends up unrequited.
     
    Salaswathi, Sep 12, 2015
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  5. Sep 14, 2015 #15
    Lakshmikishore

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    Enjoyed reading..nice narration:thumbsup
     
    Lakshmikishore, Sep 14, 2015
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    minjagan

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    Hi,,


    Interesting story.. But u stopped in a wrong time....please continue fast ..we r eagerly waiting....
     
    minjagan, Sep 14, 2015
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  7. Sep 14, 2015 #17
    Bhargavi03

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    Thanks..this is the end of the short story..I have ended it on a positive note that Madhoo hopes Vishwa's parents would agree and anyway her parents wud be happy because they know his family... She believes this destiny... Like how they met after 2 years.. Hope u get he ending now :)
     
    Bhargavi03, Sep 14, 2015
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  8. Sep 15, 2015 #18
    yukthasri

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    A very nice short and sweet story.
     
    yukthasri, Sep 15, 2015
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  9. Sep 15, 2015 #19
    Arunarc

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    Hello Bhargavi

    Welcome to the story section. Your style of writing is just wow......

    Excellent english, and your narration was really good.... Hope we will get to read more of your writings.
     
    Arunarc, Sep 15, 2015
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  10. Sep 16, 2015 #20
    Bhargavi03

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    Thanks Aruna :)
     
    Bhargavi03, Sep 16, 2015
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