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The Woman In Heat

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, Sep 11, 2007.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    The lips quivered, the constriction in the chest became unbearable, felt want to loosen out the clothes, the head ache splitting on one side, showing the desperateness to get out of this situation, there is a cramp under my belly, to get the release, my thighs would stick together to get the heat out..

    I sat through all these ordeal if u may name it so, as the time went it became even more unbearable, my curls got stuck on to my face under sweat and the cold water felt warm is it my body heat or. The pressure unbearable wanted to rush somewhere have a very cold bath to get out of this heat so common to me..

    The pain was unbearable tossing and turning for something great to come over and take away all these pain, wish I could change me, get out of me this is the limit I am unable to bear this pain in me…

    The morning came with it a wonderful atmosphere and my head ache had vanished, and felt very cool from within, the heat seemed to have washed me away and given a sweet pain, for me to enjoy…

    Yes! The train has left the Andhra border into Madhyapradesh and with it brought a beauty to the scenery with the natural chillness of its wild, the breeze seem to rock me like a baby, I was half aware of my presence there, it looked a lot soothing, thank heavens, I have crossed out of the hell all day and may be will be able to relax until I reach Delhi.

    And so used to the air-conditioned chair car, never will I travel in last minute anymore…sunkan
     
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  2. rajmiarun

    rajmiarun Gold IL'ite

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    Nice one Sunkan,
    Was thinking of so many other things. But when I came to the last line burst out laughing. Yes it is a horrible experience to travel in non ac chair car. Though I dont travel much now-a-days, but when we travel my husband makes it a point for the sake of the kids to travel by 3 tier ac if it is a night journey and by ac chair car if it is in the day time. No ordinary classes anymore.
     
  3. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    yes rajmi,
    this is a competition where i also joined and have to comeup with a write up, abt the title of what all u feel, so without any vulgarity though the title misleads a lot, when u give pure fun, many enjoy it...sunkan
     
  4. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi sunkan,

    Whats in a title...lots....omg...and finally the twist at the end.....i think you enjoyed writing as much as we enjoyed reading it..............

    BTW where is the competition.............
     
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    Sunkan - I thought you were going to describe someone's heart-attack or someone having a baby - and then at last you tell us it's a head-ache:-D . Well written, anyway!
     
  6. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    DEAR shanthi,
    it is another site of writers, and i suggest something like this why dont you take up here itself, write a nice article with this title and post it here, this way u enjoy all reading their imagination coming into this title, no vulgarity anywhere allowed the better u present the better u feel, we could discuss which is great, even twinsmom wrote abt the village belle going for water in heat, so u c the funny aspect is the title damn misleading and u comeout with so many things connected to heat and woman in different planes, rather than the actual one which all would like to read....sunkan
     
  7. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    thanks nivedi,
    always here i was labelled naughty and u were so sure i wont write such stuff, u know it is a great pride to know that....why dont you also write give it here, let us see how many people come forward, this is a game with writers, one title is selected and all write what comes to their mind, so misleading you wonder but still connected..sunkan
     
  8. Vandhana

    Vandhana Silver IL'ite

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    Et Tu Brute?? Sundari,

    Joining the gang , but ofcourse reading your piece you have given the title literally speaking. What to do we ladies have too much of a colourful imagination:oops: :oops: !!.
    Extremely enjoyed reading and bring more our way.

    Vandhana
     
  9. sunkan

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    dear vandhana,
    thanku so much for your FB it has made my day as a writer..i want u to take up this, i have already told malathy, why dont we pick a title and ask the ladies to come up with pieces put together with their imagination, now the title picking is the most sensitive part, u need to do it with an effort making it tough to wriggle out, like this title, still u c the can of worms wish could really show u all those comments here...sunkan
     
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    Hey ma'am...........
    I was shocked........how could our dear Sunkan ma'am came up with such ........article, but oh my..my........
    Tusi gr8 ho, kya socha tha aur kya nikla........filthy mind of mine.......
    Enjoyed reading though.............
    and waiting for some more suspense to unveillllll.
    Take care.
     

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