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The poetry bug has bitten me too!

Discussion in 'Cheeniya's Senile Ramblings' started by Cheeniya, Mar 10, 2008.

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  1. Mar 12, 2008 #31
    Vysan

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    Dear Sri,

    Wow!!!! What a great poem.... Dont tell me this is your first try... If it is modesty (hahahahaha... I dont to use other phrases..)... You are really great, greater.....

    I enjoyed the lines..

    But driving is fun knowing you are waiting<?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:eek:ffice:eek:ffice" /><o:p></o:p>
    At the end of my long drive.<o:p></o:p>

    When love reigns supreme<o:p></o:p>
    The world looks as if it just had a shower<o:p></o:p>
    Dressed up and perfumed.<o:p></o:p>

    This is really great...........

    Veda
     
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  2. Mar 12, 2008 #32
    Vysan

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    Dear Chitvish,

    Great.... Choice of words are great....

    Pattukku patteduthu paduvathu enimai, enimai.... Great going....

    Keep the spirits going great...

    Veda
     
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  3. Mar 12, 2008 #33
    Cheeniya

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    Dear Vysan
    All of you seem to be bent on making me feel that I am the reincarnation of Tennyson or whoever! Without any provocation, I have this habit of picturing myself as some kind of God's gift to mankind but if you are going to shower praises on me like this, I'll bloat and bloat till I burst!
    But honestly, thank you for your very sweet words of appreciation. Creativity thrives on appreciation indeed!
    Sri
     
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  4. Mar 12, 2008 #34
    Chitvish

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    You have gone indepth !Don't we say that, when in love, we look at everything from a different point of view and even what we do not like normally, appeals to us? That was what crossed my mind wen I wrote those words.
    Love,
    Chith.
     
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  5. Mar 12, 2008 #35
    Chitvish

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    pattukku pattu edupathu etc.
    This "just happened" ! I don't think, you need fear about me, writing on a regular basis !
    Thanks for the nice words, Veda - you are such a "chweetie pie" !
    Love,
    Chithra.
     
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