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The Kaladeiscopic Drive A Competition Poem

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, May 1, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    I took the usual turn on road
    saw through my rear mirror
    Waving her hand with a white bright scarf
    She looked so sexy and dreamy
    I backed my car for her
    She asked me a route I didn’t care
    just wanted her to share
    The air cool interior
    with her perfume in air

    The smooth ride took a flight
    With adrenalin flowing high
    I could see her sexy sexy thigh
    The light material caressing
    Made me ache should I had been
    Those life filled yarn
    To smoothen her youth heaven

    The usual lifeless road
    Looked too colorful tonight
    What with her presence
    Palpitating the heart
    Who could she be
    Or would she be
    Ever be mine
    So many love filled thoughts
    Racing through my mind,

    I turned across to ask her name
    And what do I see
    She is not the colorful self
    Her hair all flowing
    But a ghost with teeth
    That can suck my life
    I had to stop the car
    The door wide opened
    And she walked across.....sunkan
     
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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice realisation, before it is too late....very good..
    I thought I would see a dracula or something like that...

    sriniketan
     
  3. sunkan

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    hahah srini,
    the rest of my friends thought something more erotic and said my a twist in the poem a new dimension..thanks for commenting here pal...sunkan
     
  4. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hahaha Sunkan in the beginning thot what a romantic poem from Sunkan......and in the end, it turned out to be vamphire..........
    Nice wordings
     
  5. sudhanarayanan

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    Haha..
    For a minute when i started reading I was thinking - Sunkan! What happened to her?? " :D
    Watta twist..
     
  6. sunkan

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    thanku aruna,sudha,
    but hey but what is this u people are underestimating me a lot i do have love poems tomy credit yes but not so erotic
     
  7. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    This is not underestimate Sunkan. but was happy that you are still very very young at heart............The way you have put up that was great. I think at any age having ;ove poem is always great......
    keep up your spirit.................
     
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    thanku aruna,
    for this compliment i feel elated..sunkan
     
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    wow, sunkan maam, nice one....u began on such a romantic note and gave us a chill in the end....very different one...
     
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    thanku sowpar u enjoyed this end too..sunkan
     

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