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The Hidden Pain...

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by meril, Mar 17, 2017.

  1. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

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    THE HIDDEN PAIN...

    Everyone has a hidden pain- Yes, they do.

    Everyone has a hidden pain-The one which is hidden behind the brightest smile.

    Everyone has a hidden pain- The one that creeps in as a nightmare.

    Everyone has a hidden pain- which the tears refuses to hide.

    Everyone has a hidden pain- The ones which cannot be worded.

    Everyone has a hidden pain- When said "I don't care anymore"

    Everyone has a hidden pain- Yes, you aren't the only one.


     
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  2. jskls

    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    Lovely one ! I exactly know what u mean. No one is alone with hidden pain
     
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  3. shri0218

    shri0218 Silver IL'ite

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    Beautifully written! So true...
     
  4. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you jskls!! :):)
     
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  5. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you, shri! :):)
     
  6. periamma

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    Very true. Well written
     
  7. ammulur

    ammulur Platinum IL'ite

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    Very nice lines.
     
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    wonderful analysis of 'hidden' pain.......the real pain behind the actions is manifested in your lovely lines....
     
  9. meril

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    Thank you periamma, ammulur and Purple2017. :):):)
    Your words made me feel good!
     

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