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The fortune seeker

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sureshmiyer, Jan 26, 2012.

  1. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    THE FORTUNE SEEKER


    The parrot peeps through the tiny window

    The fortune teller coaxes it to take a bow

    Expecting keenly the parrot from the cage

    to come out and gently pick a page

    to tell his future; the young man wants to know



    Looking at the ceiling, he recalls his past

    Confined to bed, the old man looks lost

    His near and dear ones desert him

    like passing clouds; pastures not green as it seem

    With blessings for all, he waits to breathe his last



    ........... Suresh M Iyer
     
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  2. sureshmiyer

    sureshmiyer Silver IL'ite

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    This is my post No.200 for Indusladies :)
     
  3. Viswamitra

    Viswamitra Finest Post Winner

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    Congratulations on reaching the milestone of 200 blogs. What a great poem to achieve that feet. Waiting to die deserted by the kith and kin is painful. We spend our earlier life knowing the predictions of what is going to happen and later look at the ceiling not knowing when the end would come. You have explained life in simple words. Thank you.

    Viswa
     
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    The last line was beautiful Suresh. Very many congratulations for reaching that difficult milestone. -rgs
     
  5. sureshmiyer

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    Congratulations sureshmiyer for your 200th blog post. Great work indeed

    And nice poem too..
     
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    THANKS PALLAVI

    cheers
    suresh
     
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    Congratulation for ur achievement !!
    Good poem!
     
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    thanks nihasvin

    cheers
    suresh
     
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    suryakala IL Hall of Fame

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    Congratulations Sureshmiyer for your 200th Blog post!
    Great achievement!
    "The Fortune seeker"- nice poem too.
     

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