The Divided World

Dear Satchi,

Simply marvellous a thought crafted in finesse!!!
Each of your verses made me go spell-bound by your sheer magnitude of thinking and the apt words to express the same.

Was deeply touched by the last verse and noted it down in my diary:
>That when you eventually get back HOME
After having the whole world roamed,
HE will welcome you back with open arms
And you can rest there forever, happy and calm
For an eternity at complete peace
And happiness at your Heavenly father's knees.
With all your siblings black, brown and white
Holding each other's hands, never again to fight.

Great poem there and expecting more such from your desk!!

Cheers,
Saras.

 

I quote your own words to speak out my heart here...

This is the home we are eagerly waiting for to reach.

BTW, being a bird has always my dreams, because I think so much freedom they enjoy and can fly wherever they want!

Very beautiful poem, one again from you, Dear Satchi!

 

Mind blowing !!!!!!!! Just lovvved it !!!!!!

"Folks, wake up! Listen to God's orders
Create a world without borders!
Please each other do tightly embrace
Live life fully, with perfect grace

Wake up! This world to everyone belongs,
Everything in it including rights and wrongs.
Go everywhere that you were intended to go,
And in doing so, to the Creator bow!"

Loved those lines....so much !!!!!!!!!

 

Satchi dear very nice poem . I also wish I had wings and flown wherever I want but all our dreams dont come true. We see the crows and other birds and feel that they are lucky to fly but if you ask them , they will say we are not able to be on the earth, have always to be scared if someone will touch us.

I also liked the last para, feel glad to know that He will be there with open arms , what else we want, wherever we go at last we have to come to our sweet home and sweet home is the best where you get everything, whether the home is big or small but the people there have a big heart.

Thought provoking poem, well narrated, kudos to you

 

Dear satchit,

Each and everyline was very well crafted and it was too exemplarary. PRAISE THE ETERNAL MAGICIAN WHOSE POWER EXTEND BEYONF HUMAN REASON. Lovely lines
Please write more My humble request dear mam.

 

A great poem Satchi. First I thought I will quote a few lines here and there and then comment on it. Well, that would be doing injustice to the other lines of the poem. That will be repeating the blunder of men who choose some countries over the other. And who chooses who should visit them and who should not.

There is nothing poetic or artistic about what is actually there. For if it were so a photograph would become a great work of art. On the other hand a painting which though captures not the complete reality is a perfect work of art.

I was simply bowled over by the last few lines of the poem which I am tempted to quote here.


That when you eventually get back HOME
After having the whole world roamed,
HE will welcome you back with open arms
And you can rest there forever, happy and calm
For an eternity at complete peace
And happiness at your Heavenly father's knees.
With all your siblings black, brown and white
Holding each other's hands, never again to fight.

I wish that there is at least one sensible Minister of Education in this country of 1.2 billion who makes this poem a mandatory reading for all children between ages 10 and 14. Better still to make parts of it as a prayer song.

sridhar