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The death of a rose

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sushdevi, Jul 2, 2010.

  1. sushdevi

    sushdevi Senior IL'ite

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    DEAR FRIENDS,
    Below is one of my recent poems

    THE DEATH OF A ROSE

    A scrawny rose plant putforth a bud,
    Rain and shower paid ne'er a heed.
    Still the rose bud, spread and bloomed,
    Careless of the naughty wind.
    Callous nature mellowed wee bit,
    A flower was formed with petals soft.
    A wonky beetle flew down in haste,
    To suckle in it`s honeyed nest.
    Rose flower shook it`s crimson wings,
    Gloating in her queenly looks.
    A nimbus formed on sky above,
    Showers poured on, earth below.
    Rosy petals came scattering down,
    Slowly floated,before the drown.
    The puny ,slanting,thorny plant,
    Stlled in shock,at the Rose, it lost!!
     
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  2. suria

    suria Silver IL'ite

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    hi sush devi,
    nice poem,written with the real feel of the dead rose!!
    :thumbsup
     
  3. bharathreddis

    bharathreddis New IL'ite

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    beautiful poem.. keep it up...!!!:thumbsup:thumbsup:thumbsup:thumbsup
     
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    samairasmom New IL'ite

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    a very nice poem indeed .. i likes the thought !!
     
  5. sushdevi

    sushdevi Senior IL'ite

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