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The college days!!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by meril, Nov 7, 2013.

  1. meril

    meril Gold IL'ite

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    Dear All,

    Reading few stories, I have decided to put on my thinking cap and start off with my story writing skills.

    Your support and encouragement would be looked forward to.
     
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    ASHWINRAJ Gold IL'ite

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    Welcome Meril.

    Sure you are welcomed to post your story!!
    Waiting eagerly.
     
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    [FONT=arial, sans-serif]The College Days...

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    [FONT=arial, sans-serif]Akshay's sleep gets disturbed by the chirping of the birds outside his bedroom window. He opens an eye and throw the pillow at the window and pulls his blanket over his face to get back his sleep.. Soon as he was trying, he hears his mom calling out "Akshay, what is taking you so long"..

    Akshay's hand searches for his cell phone, and the time displayed made him realise that he was late for college.. "Oh God.. College..!!" he murmured to himself and got on his feet...

    In no time he was out of his room dressed in a pair of light blue jeans and white t-shirt that had a lot of prints which resembled a child's scribbling.

    "Ah finally you are here" says his mom and hands him a cup of tea, and asks him to eat his breakfast..

    No mom, I'm already late says Akshay, opening the main door to leave..Akshay your t-shirt isn't ironed.. "Ohhoo never mind mom says Akshay closing the door behind his mom"

    His college was just 10 minutes walk from home..

    To be continued..



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    meril Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you ASHWINRAJ, Hope you enjoy the first part..
     
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    divshiri87 Gold IL'ite

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    Good start meril...
    Pls try to post lenghty post .... waitin for next post....friendssmiley
     
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    Hi Meril,

    Welcome to IL. Good start and happy that IL has inspired you to write a story. Waiting for the coming episodes.
     
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    Madhumidha Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Meril,
    Welcome to IL!!! Good start!!!
    Eagerly waiting for the coming episode!!!
     
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    shashiv Gold IL'ite

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    Hai Meril,
    Welcome to IL...
    A good start....


    Shanti
     
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    The College Days...... (Part 2)

    Akshay reached his college and in no time rushed to his classroom which was upstairs and in the far end from the stairs.

    He saw his classroom door closed which made him assume that the lecturer was already in the class, he said a quick prayer and opened the door. The lecturer wasn't there, he looked around once again to make sure and entered the class.. There he saw his gang of friends up with some discussion. One of the gang member-Amal waved at Akshay, and he approached them.

    After the usual Hi5's and hand shakes, "What is going on?", asked Akshay. Sera's birthday said Ruby. Oh really? Akshay asked in a surprised tone, and "where is she?" was his next question.

    To which one of them answered "She wouldn't be coming to college today, as she would be having some guests for lunch, and asked us to meet up at "Pizza Hut" for dinner.

    "Woahh.. free food!! what more do we need??" said Akshay excitedly and Amal's hand went up in the air for a "Hi5", both of them laughed aloud. To which Ruby laughed and commented "Shameless"!!

    Their discussion was interpreted by loud cough by Mr. Iqbal, the lecturer. All the students quickly took their seat.

    During the lunch break, they all meet at the canteen. Akshay placed his order and took a seat beside Ruby.

    There he saw Ashika seated at the far end of the canteen beside the window. She seemed lost in thoughts glazing out of the windows and chewing her food. She was one of the lady, God- the creator worked on with patience and has put on a lot of effort while working on her features.. A sharp nose, her eyes always had a bright shine. Her height and slim body structure added to her looks. Anyhow, she always seemed to be a person with little words. Ashika despite being a student in their class, nobody knew much about her.

    She joined their college after almost 6 months from their 1st year class and she had got herself a transfer from her previous, the reason remains unknown to Akshay.

    Everyone joined the lecturer after the break and soon it was 4:30- time to go home..Amal promised Akshay that he would be at his place(house) by 7:30 PM in order to go for the treat as Amal had a car.

    They all waved bye and shook hands and said "Meet you at pizza hut"..

    To be continued..


     
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    Thank you one and all for the encouragement given. Nice to know you liked my story.. Keep the feedback coming in. mademydaysmiley The next episode has been uploaded.
    Hope you like it..:)
     

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