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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by lovelyme, Mar 18, 2012.

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  1. Mar 19, 2012 #11
    Priyapradeep

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    Very interesting ma. Please post the next part to break the suspense.
     
    Priyapradeep, Mar 19, 2012
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  2. Mar 19, 2012 #12
    swaran

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    who is that HE??!!!
    could that be someone that our SHE knows??...dad,bro,lover,husband?
    or someone that she might not what to Know!!!
     
    swaran, Mar 19, 2012
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  3. Mar 19, 2012 #13
    lovelyme

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    Hello Swaran,

    Thank you for the feed back.

    ITs just a short story and coz of my unavailability of time, I couldn't post it full.

    This story has nothing to do with Oh! Those Blue Eyes...

    Love
     
    lovelyme, Mar 19, 2012
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  4. Mar 19, 2012 #14
    lovelyme

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    Dear Priya,

    THank you for the feed back.

    Will post the next episode soon..

    God Bless...

    Love,
     
    lovelyme, Mar 19, 2012
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  5. Mar 21, 2012 #15
    swaran

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    hahaha lovelyme..i was actually pointing to the HE(the coat fellow) in your story...
    i guess i dint read that HE(hero who woke up from his dream) properly..i misunderstood HE as SHE...
    so thats why i had written that feedback :bonk...
    i know it has nothing to do with Oh.those blue eyes.. ;-)...my feedback had made you think that way i believe :rotfl
     
    swaran, Mar 21, 2012
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  6. Mar 21, 2012 #16
    lovelyme

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    Hello Swaran,

    I think I messed up... (What a fool, I am).... But it happens to me often... I am sorry for the confusion...
     
    lovelyme, Mar 21, 2012
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  7. Mar 21, 2012 #17
    swaran

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    thats totally fine lovelyme...
    anyways i am waiting for your lovely eyes next episode :-D
     
    swaran, Mar 21, 2012
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  8. Mar 25, 2012 #18
    JananiSubbu

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    hi ma..
    a short story is it???
    wanna know whether it is a person inside the coat or wat..??
     
    JananiSubbu, Mar 25, 2012
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