Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by lovelyme, Mar 18, 2012.
Very interesting ma. Please post the next part to break the suspense.
who is that HE??!!!
could that be someone that our SHE knows??...dad,bro,lover,husband?
or someone that she might not what to Know!!!
Thank you for the feed back.
ITs just a short story and coz of my unavailability of time, I couldn't post it full.
This story has nothing to do with Oh! Those Blue Eyes...
THank you for the feed back.
Will post the next episode soon..
hahaha lovelyme..i was actually pointing to the HE(the coat fellow) in your story...
i guess i dint read that HE(hero who woke up from his dream) properly..i misunderstood HE as SHE...
so thats why i had written that feedback :bonk...
i know it has nothing to do with Oh.those blue eyes.. ;-)...my feedback had made you think that way i believe :rotfl
I think I messed up... (What a fool, I am).... But it happens to me often... I am sorry for the confusion...
thats totally fine lovelyme...
anyways i am waiting for your lovely eyes next episode :-D
a short story is it???
wanna know whether it is a person inside the coat or wat..??