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The Bungalow full of Secrets

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Sivasakthigopi, Mar 17, 2015.

  1. katochsimi

    katochsimi Gold IL'ite

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    one think i liked is you post many episodes in single day ....n m just loving it :cool2:
     
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    Waiting for the next episode. . .Please post it soon
     
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    Its going interesting episode by episode...and so many thrilling episodes Great going
     
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    Chapter XII

    Ravi says, “First We need to check all rooms in this bungalow without Krish's Knowledge. And see if we can get any Clue here” They decided to check all rooms. But Karan says, “I will go and check every room, when he is not here.”

    Krish knocks their room door. All gets shocked, Karan says, "May be he heard us!"

    Karan opens the door. Krish stands there. Krish says, “I am leaving tomorrow early morning to Estate office urgently to attend a meeting. Here is your food and snacks. Now take your food and go inside the room itself and tomorrow take bread and snacks and stay in your room. Don’t come outside.”

    Karan interferes, “Sir, we getting bored in the same room. We are also frightened of Rebecca. We are still afraid to stay here. If you provide permission we will stay in the Hall itself. And we are ready to sleep in the hall itself! We don't want to stay upstairs sir”

    Krish thinks about it for a while. In his mind he says, “They are all frightened of Rebecca. So they won’t to go upstairs. So let them stay in the Hall. It is good or them if they stay in hall at present.” Krish says, “Ok.” They were all acting that, they were frightened to stay upstairs.

    Day 5

    They came down and stayed in the hall. Krish left the Bungalow early morning in his car.

    Karan tells them to refresh themself and take food first, we will plan next. All ate food and were ready to plan.

    Karan says, “Priya you must be near door and look outside, if Krish car or any one comes you give signal to Kavitha, and Kavitha you must be on the first step if priya signals you, you must be alert Rajesh who will stay at the end of the steps. Rajesh must give signal to Ravi who stays outside of the First room and the big room where we stay, Ravi must give signal to Sharuk who stays near steps in that First floor corridor. Victor will receive signal from Sharuk and he will be end of the Steps, Akash will receive signal from Victor and he will wait outside the room. I will go inside the Room. And Fathima and vijay sit in Hall to help all of us. If we get signal to come down, we should do it very fast.”

    All agreed and went to their places. Karan went upstairs to open the First Door.

    Mr. Natarajan and his wife reached Guest House Bungalow. There they saw travel coach. They opened the gate themselves and came in to the guest house. The guest House door is opened. Natarajan goes in search of David. He calls his name. He goes to check him in, out house. Out house door is opened. He goes inside. All things are fully spread on the floor. He turns to go to the Guest house but he looks at something and gets Shocked and stunned.

    On the other side His Wife goes inside the home and went to the kitchen to drink water as she was thirsty. She opened the kitchen door. All vessels were shattered on the floor. She looks annoyed and walks in between and opens the Fridge Door and gets water and drinks, she then closes the fridge door, the fridge shakes, and the cutlery stand on the fridge falls down. She goes to pick them up and shocked to see something there and Shouts Loudly.

    In Chennai, Madhavi is worried about Sara. She prays to god continuously . Padmanaban says, “Madhavi, don’t worry. We don’t do any sins. So our Sara will be stay happy always. You come with me, we will go to the nearest temples to pray for her.”

    In Tribe, Sara compels Jasmine to tell everything. Jasmine says, “I know only few things, but we need to know full details completely, so we need to go to the forest as soon as and we need to meet a saint who is in forest cave to reveal everything. I don’t want to frighten you by telling everything immediately.”

    In Bungalow, Karan opens the first room door. It is fully dark, so he uses his torch to find switches, finally he find switches on the wall backside of the door. There are numerous switches. He starts to try each one. Finally the room Lightgets on, He just turns and sees something in shock, the torch Light falls from his Hand. He moves forward and is shocked completely!

    To be continued....
     
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    I read every part thinking now the secret will be out and Each part is more exciting than the last. Wow, amazing writing.
     
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    Hi @tarasharma,

    Thank You!
     
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    Great Writing!
     
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    Hi @shrivni,

    Thank You!
     
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    very thrilling..waiting for next chapter..hope you ll post it soon.
     
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    @sivasakthigopi this is really nice suspense thriller story.... just read this story in one stretch....
    check your grammar,other than that everything is good
     
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