The Beauty And The Brain - Episode 7 - Serial With Weekly Episodes

Yes yes yes!

Now it's happening! This was smooth Sridhar sir. I liked it. It was told in style and the story simply seemed to glide from one scene to the next. This time, the characters were also etched well. Sharada, we know. Swetha was all of sweetness and vulnerability, what with her concern for the new auditor and the fear and awe she still has for the Khan guy. Sethu on the other hand is all of the hero one needs in life! Not only is he mellow with his personal tragedy, he is also astute and smart with his know how and gumption. Khan is contemptible enough!

If the story continues in this vein, I am sure it will hold our interest and curiosity without doubt. I always like it when good wins over evil. Until the final justice is done, I am sure I will be anxious and worried for my/your protagonists.

Bugs bugs...I wonder how much the villain gets to know, I wonder when they find them, I wonder if they will find them and..............???!

 

everyone in action - including villain

Hello Sridhar,

thanks for discharging our hero & heroine and it was nice to see both of them moving forward from their sad past slowly but surely.
Its speeding up - we surely need to grab our seat belts now.
the way Sethu handled the whole show at Khan's office was very impressive - now that we have a strong shield like Sethu to protect our vulnerable heroine, we can leave a sigh of relief. I was thrilled when Sethu literally cornered Khan with his legal threats.
But then, with the bugs implanted in Swetha's house - our good guys are completely exposed. what next??????

can't wait for the next episode.....

 

The story is moving steadily ?

Dear Sridhar,
Compared to the last few weeks, the story is moving quite briskly in this episode & expectedly so. As you can guess now, I enjoyed the following lines about a woman's instincts & I always like the subtle observations, you make about a woman !
"For the first time in her life Swetha’s motherly instincts were aroused and she wanted to protect the grown-up boy standing before her at any cost ".
You are the fittest person to be part of a ( though not strictly) Ladies' Forum!

The welcome message with a rose shows Swetha's style & made very beautiful reading. Well, rose waiting in the bed for Sethu...... ? Does it give any subtle indication of " anything" to follow ??!!This doubt, since you mentioned Sethu is the hero & Swetha, the heroine !

Your lines about Swetha feeling hurt by Rakesh's sharp attack on her, followed by Sethu's well prepared lines to hit him hard right back, are very interesting.

You tend to repeat phrases like " donkey's years" in your writing ?! Now , please don't tell me, you can't teach an old dog, new tricks - yet another of your favourite examples !

In this episode also " the end is the beginning " ! I am already bugged how the bug will work !

Love & regards,
Chithra.

 

Hi Shridhar,

I came back from vacation and got all the episodes of "The Beauty and the Brain". Another superb job done by you to make us glued to Indusladies site.This sort of stories are very common in bollywood. We all will eagerly wait for the end.

The way Sethu handled the scene in Khan's office was impressive. The whole image comes in ones minds while reading. Scared abouts bugs but lets wait and see.

cheers

 

smooth run

today's episode has a smooth start and a smooth finish. No slagging, no beating around the bush. I was expecting Sethu to do a detailed analysis of the case-- abt life of shwetha, rakesh etc for the next two episodes! You took me by surprise. Just like Sethu captivated Shwetha by his brilliance and sincerity to his profession, you have captivated us readers by your arty descriptions -- the inherent chemistry between Shwetha and Sethu was obvious and was potrayed very beautifully by you. You are certainly a 'poetic author'!

Great work Varalotti. I really enjoyed this espsode, i was totally glued to the comp today!

Purnima