The Beauty And The Brain - Episode 4 - Serial With Weekly Episodes

Good going

Dear Varalotti,
Please excuse me for not responding for the third episode. I had been on a pilgrimage at Kerala and was back only on 31st, again been going out. So by the time I read the episode, it was late for commenting.
The present episode, it was good reading it. I can see many ILites have slight hesitatioin when they read about the description of female body. But I don't feel like it. After all, a writer have to give some masala to a story or it will be very bland, especially in a story like this one. May be as we all feel that you are a close friend, most have taken liberty and chided you. It is okay and understandable.
The story is gaining speed slowly but steadily, good going. Now it is suspense time, waiting to see what Sharada does to avenge the Khan.
By the way, your description of the Kapoor family is real, from what I have read. Now both the grand daughters have voluntarily done what their grandpa likes most, only he is not alive to see it. Satyam..... and Mera Naam ....... were really vulgar only. Even Sangam should be included in this list.
And saying that most actors have legalised their so called 2nd marriages is not right. As per law, a man cannot have 2 wives . I think only Muslims can wed more than one woman simultaneously. The public is keeping its face by calling them second wives. Sridevi has also married an already married man.
Anyway, you are creating great expectations by the plot. We are all waiting for the next episode eagerly.
Best wishes,
varloo

 

Dear Varalotti,
Since you post ur episodes during weekends,by the time i read it a lot of discussion has already started!!!weekends are generally busy for me!!anyways,in my openion,what we have read so far is something we know or have been reading many times in various sources.....ofcourse,i consider the first few episodes as an introduction to your story backdrop(bollywood).....but what we are all waiting for is some real twists&turns!!a sudden development!!or a shocking revelation!!till now it has been predictable......but its going smooth!!!