The Beauty And The Brain - Episode 1 - Serial with Weekly Episodes

The rocket has been launched !!!!!

Dear Sridhar,

You must be fond of creating suspense in the readers' minds!!! Just like the TV soaps that stop at the wrong moment, You have stopped the episode and left us bite away our nails for the rest of the week!
I feel swetha will survive as she is the protagonist!!!May be someone will save her!!!

AHHHH!!!! U will keep me hooked to the monitor on the same time next saturday. That is for sure!!!

We had a maruti ride for today!! Hope to have rides on the benz or skoda, in the coming episodes!!

Thanks for a wonderful start!!!
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good beginning

Dear Varalotti,
a good beginning. Enough scope for suspense also. Well, we will have to wait and see.
varloo

 

Lovely Start!

Hello Sridhar,

The beauty had started her life well enough, but looks like she has to slow down and take a look at LIFE, thank god all of us know that you will not let her die, but still it did feel sad that she is so upset that she decided to put an end to her glorious life , that too at such an young age and having the whole world at her feet...

How we tend to place our happiness on another human being's hands and when something goes wrong with a relationship, we are not able to cope with it! It is really something to mull about!
You have really described the Beauty and lifestyle well enough for us to visualise Swetha surrounded by her maids and the lovely cars!
Thanks for the wonderful start, story has some power and we all look forward to the next few weeks with eagerness.
regards,

 

Very Different!

Hi Varalotti,

this is very different and i think such suicidal attempts on betrayal of lover happens everywhere, moreso in the cine world(at least such attempts/deaths get popularised by the media in the cine field). Hope this story gives a good mesasge to such people who lose their sanity for a moment in the life which results in such hasty decisions!!!

Once again a very addictive and a wonderful start from you!!!

Thank you for being with us!

Regards,
Purnima

 

the beauty ad the brain

dear varlotti,

the story begins well. how silly is the human being depending on another person for his happiness.i amassuming things will be more positive as you always write positive thoughts.
thank you fora nice saturday treat.
meenu

 

Good beginning...

Dear Varalotti

Your position as a master story-teller is getting consolidated with each passing second..!! very good beginning ...I know your story won't turn out cliched or common since I feel your stories usually have intelligent diversion, and your mind seems to be a treasure trove of novel ideas... but I sincerely hope there won't be much of voyeuristic masala, though the story revolves around celebrities. ( we are getting over dose of such stuff in movies and thru print media..)

I missed reading your earlier much loved serial story- The haunted House' because I am not too comfortable reading eerie and spooky stuff...but this one, I am sure will keep me waiting for the next post every week..

Good luck to you for more accolades and adulation from the fine ladies - you deserve more for your prolific creative outpourings...

regards

ambika

 

Great!!!

Dear Varalotti

The story has started well...We are able to picturise the scenes and Swetha's state
beautifully since you are a great story-teller and the way you are describing each and every event happening in Swetha's house makes me feel I am actually there!

Now I think you have 2 options-
1.Either it is going to be like a flashback and I think finally Swetha will end her life.
or
2. Swetha will be saved now and then the story will begin from there.

Let's hope it is the 2nd option.

Cheers