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Taste of the first dewdrops…….

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  1. Jun 8, 2011 #1
    SARASVADIVU

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    Hey! Dears..this happens to be my very first poem, that I had penned during my School-days.

    Just for the ‘feel’ of that first scribbling- presenting it without making any changes.
    Hope you’ll will like it?!


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    Is life all about climbing the ladder of success by pushing down others?

    Is not but life..a sweet ceremony of ‘Thanks-giving’ to God!!

    What’s all this haste for??
    Why should we ever have ‘number-games’ calling someone No.1??
    Is it not enough if we excel in doing all things with a spirit of CHEER!


    Come! ‘tis time to taste the first dewdrops from the blushing pink rose on your pot..

    ‘tis time to drink in the beauty of the ‘White Dainty’- Moon..
    Why contemplate instead on going to the Moon???



    Indulge in giving away a few rupees to the needy,
    Indulge in giving a pat on a friend’s back,
    Indulge in singing the song of love for all,
    Come indulge in enjoying your life as it is....

    So, come let’s walk o’er the horizon of all myths and carve out a new world filled with ZEST & ZEAL!

    Saras.
     
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    vidchakra

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    Superb dear Saras!!!:thumbsup Very cute one
    This poem has the innocence of a kid...:)

    Keep sharing!!!
     
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    satchitananda

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    Hi Saras,

    Amazing talent and promise shown in a young kid and very clear thoughts very beautifully presented. :cheers

    Really loved these lines.
     
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    varalotti

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    dear Saras,
    that was a soft, sweet poem. I especially loved these lines
    What’s all this haste for??
    Why should we ever have ‘number-games’ calling someone No.1??
    Is it not enough if we excel in doing all things with a spirit of CHEER!
    I am involved in a profession which is nothing but numbers. I know the number game. I also know that it's a zero-sum game.
    And the endless struggle to be the "alpha male". Ultimately it is better to have a large heart than a large house.
    And those obsessed with numbers (I don't mean the accountants who just love numbers and are not obsessed with them) are never happy.
    The message is loud and clear. You have excelled once again.
    God bless,
    love,
    sridhar
     
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    sreemanavaneeth

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    My milksweet,

    Lovely and cheerful lines and i just overwhelmed with pleasure. Pls do post more.waiting for another one.
    Indulge in giving a pat on a friend’s back,
    Indulge in singing the song of love for all,
    Come indulge in enjoying your life as it is
     
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    Malar2301

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    Dear Saras,

    Beautiful lines...I liked almost all the lines!!

    So you have started this in your school days itself is it....great!!

    Then you should be having more...share them all ...for us to enjoy the dew of the words your phrased.........

    Looking for more from you...:thumbsup
     
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    mssunitha2001

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    My dear Saras

    Superb !!!!!!!!!! Just lovvvvvved all your lines... so beautiful !!!!!!!:cheers
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    There are only two ways to live your life.
    One is as though nothing is a miracle.
    The other is as though everything is a miracle.
    - Albert Einstein
     
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    SARASVADIVU

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    dear vidu,

    glad you liked my first scribbling:)

    :cheers
    Saras
     
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    SARASVADIVU

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    Dear satchi,

    Oh! was simply floored by those compliments coming from a great writer and a good friend:cheers
    Saras..
     
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    SARASVADIVU

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    Dear Sir,

    Blessed and honoured with your 'keep-me-going' comments.Thanks a ton for the time and the lovely feedback!

    Regards & love,
    Saras
     
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