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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Reenae, Oct 30, 2007.

  1. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    Hamesha sabko hasate rahi,[​IMG]

    Takdir aksar hame rulati rahi,[​IMG]

    Begano se bhi vafa ki hamne,[​IMG]

    Apno se hi bewafai pati rahi,[​IMG]

    Khafa hu aj khud se, khuda se,[​IMG]

    Aas fir bhi dosto se lagati rahi,[​IMG]

    Socha samjenge is nachis k man ko,[​IMG]

    Par is ummid se bhi dhoka khati rahi,[​IMG]

    Thay kuch ase dost jinko chahat thi hamari khushi ki,[​IMG]

    Aur unki hi chahat ko bar-bar thukarati rahi,[​IMG]

    Sochati hu kya paya maine is matlab bhari duniya me,[​IMG]

    Sabko apne matlab k liye jita dekhati rahi,[​IMG]

    [FONT=Times New
    Roman]Na kisiko rulana, Na kisika dil dubhana chaha,[​IMG][/FONT]

    Fir bhi dil pe naye naye zakhm khati rahi.[​IMG]


     
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    hi reenae,

    lagta hai badi chot khaayi doston seh....

    arre woh dost hi kya dost joh...
    dosti ki kadar nah jaane...
    kyon kosey apni taqdeer ko
    in jaiso keliye..

    zara parako yaara mil jayenge tumhe...
    dost jo marenge yah mit jayenge
    dosti ke khatir.....
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Reenae
    As I was reading I was about to write have you pissed off by ur friends but Shanthi already replied to u asking you that in a poetic manner.
    Lagta hai chot khaaya hai doston say...........
    Aaree kya matalab hai aysay doston sey, hum sey karo dosti tumari taqdeer ko badal dayaga hum.
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Shanthi phir sey wah wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    What is the use of such friend who cannot understand you..............wah wah
    Make such friends who will die for you.............. wah wah Shanthi some more poems please.

     
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    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi aruna,

    really your encouragements are like what should i say....but they make me think if i am really worthy of all this...for a few scribbles..
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Shanthi
    You just go on writing let us decide if that is worth it or not. That you will come to know by the replies how much people like your work I don't have to mention it dear
     
  7. Reenae

    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    Don't get me wrong friends...

    Touch wood - kisi sey abhi koi chot nahin pahunchi hai. I have a great group of friends from college and university and we are a total of 14!!! Yes, I have known some of them since nursery school. I often say to my best friend "tere badle mai zamane ki koi cheez na loon"

    Then why did I share Taqdeer with you? well, I just have a passion for sentimental songs, shayari and ghazals....

    Afterall, hai sab sey madhur woh geet jinhe ham derd ke sur mei gaate hai
    jab hadh sey guzar jaati hai khushi aansoo bhi chalakte aate hai..

    Anything with sentiments sounds the sweetest!

    Chao
     
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    Reenae Bronze IL'ite

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    SAB SEY HAI PYARI AYE DOST DOSTI TUMHARI
    SACH MEI BADAL HI DAALI KISMET HAMARI...
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello Reenae
    Don't take it serious we were just joking as that poem was so touchy and nice one
    SAB SEY HAI PYARI AYE DOST DOSTI TUMHARI
    SACH MEI BADAL HI DAALI KISMET HAMARI...
    These wordings too r great...........
     
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    Hi Aruna,

    Arre ham doston sey kabhi khafa nahin hotey, khas ker agar dost aap jaisi ho! doston ki ched chaad tou achi lagti hai - apnapan lagta hai.

    Take care
     

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