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"Symbionts"- a true version !!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RamyaVaradharajan, Dec 30, 2007.

  1. RamyaVaradharajan

    RamyaVaradharajan Bronze IL'ite

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    Nature, showering affection profusely,
    Man, returning a token of love rarely.

    Nature, wanting to her best,
    Man,striving hard to achieve the rest.

    Nature, taking the innate shape for pleasure,
    Man, thinking to threaten her by pressure.

    Nature, reflecting a crystal clear mirror image,
    Man, trying to get the synonym of this message.

    Nature, glittering her way through the stars,
    Man, pretending to win more wars.

    Nature, triggering the sense of perseverance,
    Man, achieving things by hindrance.

    Nature, differentiating good and evil,
    Man, appreciating the bad will.

    Nature, glowing forever for everything,
    Man, growing forever for nothing.

    Nature, leading form darkness to light,
    Man, pledging his own plight.

    Nature, blossoming to comfort us,
    Man, acquiring as much as he can.

    Man, not knowing his inner self,
    Nature, deciphering to be herself !!!


    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan

     
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  2. Shanvy

    Shanvy IL Hall of Fame

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    hi ramya,

    the poem is too good. and quite true. relating to the flawless nature and selfish human......

    you should have mentioned....about the

    nature's balancing act...when she feels man deserves that....then this would really be complete.

    keep writing...
     
  3. Kamla

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    Dear Ramya,

    A very thoughtful poem. The way you have played with words is very interesting.
    Liked the way you have compared man and nature....rather...Nature and man!
    Good one.:clap

    L, Kamla
     
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    Dear Ramya
    Excellent..very good work.nice to read..keep writing..
     
  5. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear most Shanthi ma'am,

    Thank you very much for having added more value to my bit of thought. Very true are your words. Even when we try to emulate nature's methodologies she rests peacefully. But we fail to understand that her fury and revenge can reach any heights and is par beyond human acceptance.

    Nature's balancing act is an absolute, complete and thus a flawless phenomenon where one can realize "For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction" !!

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
  6. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear Kamla ma'am,

    Its a treat that you have given me by signing in here. Thank you very much for the encouragement that constantly boosts my inner spirits. The positive tone in your feedback is what i enjoy and relish always.

    Thank you once again ma'am.

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
  7. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear Chitra ma'am,

    Thank you very much for your feedback. Its a kind of motivation that ILites shower, make others write more out of what they have felt and experienced. I always feel IL is my home !!

    Thank you very much

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan
     
  8. Sriniketan

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    Very nice one, Ramya!

    We don't understand bonk the value of things when it is available in abundance.
    Only later we realise those and mend our ways, which will be too late for nature.

    sriniketan
     
  9. RamyaVaradharajan

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    Dear most Srini ma'am,

    How can I ever forget the way you reciprocate consistently:cheers:queen:gift!! Thank you very much for your valuable feedback!!

    Very true ma'am. We tend to neglect "nature" but constantly put her in a gamble to speculate the returns of our choice. Do we then realize the cause and the effect phenomenon ??shakeheadshakehead

    Regards
    RamyaVaradharajan


     

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