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story line of my first story Nesam pudhidhu (so called first love)

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  1. yams

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    Hi friends!

    felt very happy in seeing your response for the story line of my last novel!
    so thought of giving it for the other stories also!

    here comes the story line of my first novel( nesam pudhidhu)

    Nesam pudhidhu: meaning the love that arises first!

    The story starts up with the heroine in america where she longs a lot for the taste of coffee of her mother! it has been 5 years since she came to america and every morning she hears her mothers voice waking up her with the smell of the wonderful coffee she does!

    heroine name is ranjini - a calm and beautiful girl like the one next to our house. no so beautiful as cine stars but a homely girl who always wears saree!
    while she arrives to the office a bed of flowers fall on her and when she opens her eyes spots bala the one and only friend for her in america whom she trusts and be as friend!
    He is the best friend of her!
    when she asks for the reason of the flowers that he made to fall on her he admits and scolds her for forgetting her own birthday!
    he gifts her tickets for india as birthday pressent and instead of seeing happiness in her face he sees sorrow and fear!

    when he asks for the reason she refuses to say to him but somehow bala convinces her to take her to india for the sake for her parents under the condition that they will return in one week and won't take time more than it!

    when they reach the indian airport there seems a lot of crowd around and an old man tells them the reason for it as a young business man is arriving after his victory in foriegn and people are here to welcome him!
    On hearing the word as young business man ranjini asks bala to take her to home soon and sudddenly the rush that happens in crowd made them to seperate. while ranjini moves to the place where she sees a person whom she had thought not to see anymore in her life!
    who is none other than her husband!

    yes ranjani is a married girl 5 years back she was married to the same guy!
    when bala sees ranjani he takes her out by holding her hand which makes ranjini's husband starring at them!

    while going in car bala even though knowing her restlessness don't ask her anything about it and when he dashes a man in cycle with the same thought gets down and convinces him! but ranjini knowing that the person in cycle is drunk slaps him and asks bala to get into the car!

    bala thinks being patient is no more useful and compels her to tell why she is so restless after reaching india and ranjini says him about her past life!
    She is the elder daughter of her parents and after scoring well in 12th she liked to study MBBS. first even though her parents refused first then later they accepted to make her study from her aunts house where she has got the seat!

    Her aunt has a son named ramesh and he was so friendly with her. later her aunt sows the seed of marriage in his mind which makes him to love ranjini later!
    one day he proposes her thinking that she is also in love with him when they were alone at home!
    But ranjini refuses and admits that she thinks him juat as a good friend. even though ramesh is good in nature he thinks all he like for should be his own property so he misbehaves to her to make her his wife. thinks that it may make her to accept for the marriage!
    But this incidents shocks ranjini whether it is the same person whom she thinks as a good companion?? she tries to escapes from him and gets in to a car where she meets a young man the hero of the story! first she frighten of seeing an young man in car but later is charming nature makes her to be comfortable. without any reason she says him about her problem and asks him to rescue her from it!
    he thinks of handing over ranjini to the police so that they may take her safely to her parents while reaching the police station suddenly ramesh comes there and fights with him thinking ranjini is in love with him! when police asks the relation about them hero couldn't say anything but ramesh says that she is his own wife and shows them the photo of both as a proof!
    he also admits that she is mentally upset and shows a thaali (the sacred rope of marriage) that this the one he tied her and since she a mental she had removed it. ranjini begs the hero not to sent her with him and the police refuses to sent her with the hero since he is no way related to her!

    suddenly the Hero gets the thaali from ramesh and ties it in the heroines neck which makes all the people to freeze in shock!
    ranjini seems to be the most shocked person since she never expected it!
    holding her in hand he tells them that he is her first husband and he will provide the proof that she is unmarried till now and that ramesh is saying lie to them!

    seeing the wealth of the hero the police warns ramesh that if they come to know that he is wrong they will take severe action on him and sent him home!
    Taking her in car the hero tries to convince her about the incident happened suddely but ranjini being in extreme shock says him that she needs to go home!
    Knowing the condition of her he tries to give her some time to recover and sents her to her parents from where without saying anything she goes to US and after five years she is seeing her husband now in airport!

    Bala is also shocked to know this and he says we can speak about this later and takes her to her home!
    Where ranjini's parents are delighted to see her and the moment is filled with emotions!
    later at evening she gets the sweet coffee of her mother for which she had always longed for!
    she asks permission from her parents to take bala to the beach! where Bala admits that what she had done is wrong!

    Ranjini gets emotional and blames bala for even not understanding her! she asks how come she accepts a person who is no way related to her and she not even know his name!
    she stands in the water and closes her eyes which makes Bala to understand her pain! so he comes near her to convince where suddenly they both are pushed from back!

    Later they come to know it is none other than padmini (Ranjini's younger sister)
    Bala and padmini fight with each other which looks so cute!
    ranjini convinces them and asks them to return home soon since padmini requested bala to be with her! ranjini returns alone in her car while she sees a breakdown car in a turning!

    An old man comes to her asking for the lift for his owner!
    she says to get in and when she realises the voice beside her it was none other than her husband!
    he admits his name as ragunandhan and compels her to drive the car! getting irritated by his speech she drives the car and at the stop where he gets down notices a big bungalow which his ragu's house!

    Ranjini refuses to come in but since ragu's mother also witnessed her she was supposed to go inside!
    while showing all the rooms thinking that he could have got married again she refuses to get into his room since the arrival of her may disturb the happiness of his present family!
    She says what she thinks about him and refuses to get inside his room this makes him to laugh and he continues the drama as if he is married and asks her to come and see his wife who is the most beautiful lady in the world!
    ranjini without knowing that it is her heart that refuses to see his wife in ego thinks that she is doing so for the welfare of their family hapiness!

    while she enters she witnesses her image in the mirror and raghu says showing her image that she is his beautiful wife and asks her to not leave him anymore and he cannot be without her anymore!
    ranjini's anger gets raised as he starts speaking as a loving husband! all she thinks is that he married her just to rescue her from the problem and not because of love!

    when he tries to hug her she slaps him! even when ragunandhan gets angry he controls it!
    ranjini comes running to her house and admits everything to her mom! hearing which her mother slaps her in back and tell her that they know everything about her marriage long back and that no one could be like ragunandhan! she scolds her for being so rude to him and pushes her out of the house to go and be with him!

    due to continuous shocks ranjini could not tolerate and walks as her leg goes a way and when she spots the place she walked had led her to raghu's house!
    Thinking about her mother she thinks to ask sorry for her act to raghu tries to knock the door before which raghu feels her presence and opens the door by himself!

    when he asks her what made her to be so dull?? with lots of love she hugs him and starts to cry! convincing her raghu feels like her life is in his hands and feels happy!
    when she comes to normal she tries to go away! raghu tries to convince her and makes her to stay with him but she completely refuses it and asks him to leave her alone! she also says him that she cannot live with him at any cast!

    getting hurt by her words raghu asks her for one wish after which he says that he won't interfere in her life anymore so ranjini accepts it and asks what he wants!
    He asks her to spent only one day with him promising her that he won't even touch her without her permission!

    ranjini accepts to be with him! he takes her to a place where she finds a beautiful heaven like palace! he tries to tell that it is the one built for her but stays silent!
    that day night at 12 he wishes her with a cake which makes her to think what is so special about today!
    he says it is their fifth wedding anniversary a special one because it is the first and last that he is going to celebrate with his wife tears filled in his eyes! feeling so hurt seeing him! ranjini couldn't even sleep! slowly love blooms for her on him!

    The next day when she comes down in steps watching her husband she rolls down and get hurt! seeing her in blood raghu frightens and even cries not able to see her in such a position and takes her to the hospital!
    the doctor is a good friend of him and tells ranjini about his love for her. she was supposed to be for four days due to the hurt she got in her head!
    while returning home she stares at her husband and when he asks what it is? she shows some distance place and asks him telling it looks so beautiful!
    he takes him there where there was a beautiful waterfalls!
    ranjini turns into a child on seeing it and starts playing!

    seeing the new nature of his wife raghu looks with lots of love in his eyes! suddenly when she screams in fear and raghu runs towards her spotting a chameleon their he starts laughing but ranjini hugs him tightly in fear! which makes both the husband and wife to lose each other!
    after sometime the same animal separates them and they scolds it in mind!

    reaching home raghu provides her with books she like and asks her to take rest that he is going out for some work! when he returns finds her sleeping still without even having her lunch! he scolds her but seeing the fear on her eyes he leaves all his anger and feeds his wife like child!

    after which he takes her for a walk in garden where she keeps a rose in her hair and admits it looks so beautiful than when it is in the plant! they spot a little kid son of the gardener who asks them to show a little kid as him (their child) raghu kids that if aunty says ok! soon he may get a companion to play with!
    the child begs to her to say ok! and raghu laughs at her when she struggles to say the answer!
    later the gardener comes and takes his child!
    when he asks to answer him she says him to remarry if he wants a child! getting disappointed by her words he leaves the place! ranjini even feels bad for saying so to him!


    The next day her bandage his removed and she is supposed to return to her home! both of them pray inside that raghu prays that she should not talk about leaving him where as ranjini prays the same!
    while coming to say about her change of mind and her love for him! raghu misunderstands that she has come to ask about taking her back and replies her that he will take her at evening!
    Disappointed with his answer ranjini thinks he no longer needs her and keeps quiet!

    meanwhile raghu asks her to leave alone by providing car telling the reason as he is supposed to attend a function organised for him! for the victory of him since he as been selected as the best business man! ranjini asks him to take also with him! at the function when she is supposed to sit with him two ladies talk badly about her and he corrects it by announcing that she is none other than his wife and she has been in america for some official reason now she has returned to him!
    which makes ranjini to totally fall for him! but raghu after the function gets over asks her whether she wants to go to her parents or america?? Thinking that he no longer like her and let he happy at least ranjini asks him to get ticket for america!

    while leaving both hide their tears from each other!
    after all the formalities gets over raghu leaves her and goes since he cannot see her leaving!
    he goes to the beach and starts crying like something without even picking up the call!
    after three rings when he picks up she hears the crying voice of padmini admitting that a plane has been crashed and fell into the ocean and they are announcing ranjini's name in the dead members list!

    raghu runs to the place and when he comes to know that his wife is no more he faints and when he opens his eyes for the next time he stares at everything like a child! seeing him bala and padmini are so hurt and tries to recover him by taking him to a new place!

    They take him to ooty but it takes a long time for raghu to recover from her memories! she sees the face of her wife in everything even in a single rose!
    he talks to it thinking it as his wife asking it the reason for leaving him!

    days pass and raghu recovers slowly!
    just comes to a position to talk to everyone! but the smile in his face had completely disappeared!

    one day when they go to a temple he stands out starring at a small girl child thinking of his wife!
    after their marriage once when he went to her house he read her diary and came to know that she loves girl child a lot! suddenly a car comes fast and in the taught of saving the child he rushes before him some one rescues the child and when he pulls that persons towards him he couldn;t believe that still it is his wife ranjini!
    Holding her tight with him he even restricts her to move!
    Even bala and padmini where very happy to see her and cry in happiness!

    After returning home! the pair is left alone!
    raghu asks for her to forgive him for his mistake and asks her to be with him always that he cannot live without her anymore and she is his life!
    ranjini tells her love for him and that made her to not leave him alone and go back to america. she says about everything she thought and that the reason that he married only to rescue her at that situation only stands as the barrier between them!
    raghu hugs her tightly and says if rescuing her is his only motive he could have done it any way but his love for her only made him to marry her!
    knowing his love for her ranjini thinks to give him all the happiness to him in the world being his wife!

    the story ends with the couple leading a happy life!

    Hope you all like it! i got a good response for this story in tamil! its just a fictional story just for you friends to enjoy! hope you had! waiting for your comments! do reply!
     
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  2. satchitananda

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    Hi Yams,

    Thanks for the effort you have taken in giving us the gist of the entire story in English. Am really happy at having got a chance to read your first story. It is very interesting and I enjoyed reading it.

    Looking forward to reading more of your stories. :thumbsup
     
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    Hi Yamini,

    I read your tamil Nesam Pudhidhu. translation in English is equally good.
     
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    Thanks Yamini for your effort to translate your first Tamil story to English.
    Enjoyed it very much .............you have the flare for writing and keep it going..........hope to see many stories and also translations.
    Take care
    Love
     
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    Good story Yamini. Will check your other tamizh stories too. all the best.
     
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    Thanks satchi!
     
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    Thanks usha! for your wonderful comments to my threads!
     
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    Thanks shanta dear! sure i will!
     
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    Thanks mira!:)
     
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    Its a nice story but shows how people can easily misunderstand each other. WHy wait for someone else to tell you that they love you, you should take the first step.. good one!
     

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