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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by RatnaMalliswari, Sep 21, 2024.

  1. Sep 21, 2024 #1
    RatnaMalliswari

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    When you are near me
    I can't say how much I love you
    When you are far
    I sing for you
    Can you hear me?

    When you are near me
    I say it with all my eyes
    Listen to my eyes
    They say so much
    Can you hear me?

    When you are near me
    Why do I fear
    to say you're apple of my eye
    my heart races when I see you
    Can you hear me?

    When you are near me
    I thought it right to apprise
    I had second thought
    In mean time you left
    I cried out
    Can you hear me ?

    When you overheard
    My sound of love
    And when you swept off at my feet
    I jumped up and down
    I immediately
    fell head over heels.

    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Brilliant thoughts of a tender spouse must be in her early twenties longing for proximity of partner when he is away.

    During reading your short & sweet poem above, what I had stated in my profile page under information comes to mind at once.


    கிட்டக்க வந்தா எட்டப்போ
    எட்டக்க இருந்தா
    கிட்டக்க வா.
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    She utters - You get lost
    If At a safe distance
    She whispers -Why you are afar?

    Life in union♥️ in communion is paradox for ever!!!!!!!!!!‍‍‍✌
     
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    Hello @Thyagarajan sir
    Thank you for spending your valuable time to read my poetry and giving feedback with your wonderful thoughts.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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    Dear Ratna,

    This lovely piece must be one of your best! The words trilled like a rill; soft and pleasant to ear, and fraught with romanticism. Well done! :clap2:
     
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    Hello @Tamrakshar
    Aw Thank you! You made my day.
    A sudden feel, immediately I posted.
    I guess this is my 27th poetry in IL.
    Thank you for your appreciation.
    Regards
    Ratna
     
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