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Souls Entwined My Poem For A Competition

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by sunkan, May 21, 2008.

  1. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    Dear dear sis of mine
    We are the two sides to a coin
    Do you gauge the strength of mine?
    None can ever know the depth
    None can ever measure its intensity
    We come to this world with an empty pot
    Will fill it with love that can be got
    Some are lucky but others are muggy
    None can walk the privileged path

    You and I know this to be
    Very well intertwined
    In body and mind we will be varied
    But never in our soul that’s so twined
    That has known a journey together
    Never to be left apart to whither
    Our soul will rise like a smoke
    Will curl and furl still together

    We may be carved as two in one
    But still we will be embossed as one
    They show the exterior
    But we know the intrinsic
    Will pray to be recycled
    In many a birth
    You will always
    be my dear never fear
    sunkan

    MY POEM FOR A COMPETITION YOU CAN ALSO JOIN DO THAT.. I AWAIT YOUR CONTRIBUTION HERE FOR THE PICTURES. GIVEN SUNKAN
     
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  2. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    That was a nice poem Sunkan
    All the Best for the competition
     
  3. Devika Menon

    Devika Menon Gold IL'ite

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    Dear Sunkan,

    Thats a wonderful poem a subject so close to my heart. I am very close to my sis and could agree with each of the lines here. You have written very well and I wish you all the best for the contest!

    Love,
    Devika
     
  4. sunkan

    sunkan Gold IL'ite

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    dear devika,
    where is your contribution on this picture, i bring in these so that many can come out with their talent in poem and do wonders with their mind by showing what all comes to mind when looking at a picture, only when all join we could create a poem circle with enthusiasm here..sunkan
     
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    thanku aruna,
    would appreciate if you can join as a story or poem anything for this picture..sunkan
     
  6. Devika Menon

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    Dear Sunkan,

    Hope this is fine,

    Me and my dear sister
    so similar like the mirror,
    One soul two bodies
    Sis's less more buddies

    Oft I wonder why
    you cry when I cry
    you laugh when I smile
    always together every mile

    God bless our love
    we humbly to you bow
    difficult to find a good sis
    we're blessed with this bliss

    Love,
    Devika
     
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    NKumar New IL'ite

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    Dear Madam, sorry to intrude in this thread like this...But you see I have started my own blogs here,,,But I could not find how to post new entry there...Induslady's FAQ is of no use, it is disabled...I have asked a qusetion to her but of no useas she did not reply...

    When we go to Options> Go tp my blog, we dont find how to post a new entry there...Pl tell me what to do...


    Nkumar

    Chennai
     
  8. sunkan

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    wonderful devika,
    i think u took the theme of sis from me, it could be anything you know, some have written about a mom and a child and a child and mother and so on, about the twin sis kind, but sometime we get influenced by what we read first about a picture,thanku for participating it was nice of you and happy for your input here..sunkan
     

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