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Somewhere ! There You Are !!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by brindhak, May 14, 2015.

  1. brindhak

    brindhak Gold IL'ite

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    Somewhere ! There You Are

    On a silent moonless night
    Witnessing the countless stars
    Spaced out of the world
    I sit there ....... Somewhere ..


    The breeze bestows gently
    And Caress my cheeks ...
    Wiping the falling tears ..
    Sustaining my muted soul .....


    Random thoughts airing around
    Rising endless queries inside ...
    Anticipating each moment
    Like an abandoned little child .....


    Haunting griefs gaming on me .
    Intruding fear in each cell of mine ..
    Enclosed with the loneliness
    I sit there .... Somewhere !!


    Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..
    The firmness of your concealed touch
    Compressed my trembling arms .
    Reposing me to existence ...

    Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..
    With all my faith and belief
    Through our immortal friendship ..
    That we developed all these years ...


    Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..
    Always with me , in tough times..
    Composing me with positive vibes
    Erasing the shades of darkness...


    Oh ! Lord !! What more can I ask ?
    Somewhere there ! I can feel you
    In forms of trust ,truth and love ..
    Spreading bliss and contentment ...


    You are always there for me ....
    In the innermost spirit of the soul ....
    In the forms of peace and love ,
    Bringing back my lost smile .....


    Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..!!!
    My beloved God !!!!!!
     
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  2. MyselfandI

    MyselfandI Silver IL'ite

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    Such a fine piece of poetry, thanks for sharing
     
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  3. PavithraS

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    Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..
    Always with me

    Brindha,

    He is somewhere inside you, you can feel him, always with you.. He is making you Him ...

    Excellent !!

    Thank you,
    Regards,
    Pavithra..
     
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    Poetlatha Platinum IL'ite

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    Lovely poem, 1-4 stanzas felt as if you wrote the poem for me, last couple of them reflect the presence of the Almighty in you, you are so lucky to feel the presence of God! Post more please. Enjoyed thoroughly, thanks for sharing.
     
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    Sparkle19 Silver IL'ite

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    awesome!!!
     
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    Scorpio707 Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi Brinda,

    Liked what you have expressed here...I like this line - Somewhere there ! I can feel you ..!!! :thumbsup
     
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    Thankyou all of you for your nice words ! Happy you all liked it
     
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