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So Who Killed Her ???? Episode 6

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, May 9, 2016.

  1. sumalynux

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    Raju, call up vinod and ask if we can meet him after lunch said leena

    Raju called up and spoke to vinod.........

    Mam, he said tomorrow is his wife priya's 9th month thithi/shraddha (monthly ritual done for deceased people) so his parents and sisters are coming from town he needs to pick up them... Hes on leave tomorrow, so he can meet us day after tomorrow itseems... said Raju

    Hmm ok... I have some shopping work, as i will be leaving in 15days to London.. Let me finish that.. You go to office said Leena..

    Next day...

    Leena and Raju left to opening ceremony of "Arya constructions" ....

    At the entrance juice and cheese balls were served....

    The function had already started... Homam was going on... Couple Sneha and vinod was doing homam.. Arya one year old baby was lying in Sneha's lap...

    Sunil varma was seen talking to group of men, who looked like business friends and partners..

    pooja was completed in 30mins...

    After pooja, people started giving gifts and wished Pavan..

    Leena observed pavan and sneha...

    pavan was a fair and handsome fellow who was around 30years... He was looking like a south indian hero with white shirt and dhothi. Next to him was Sneha who was wearing a pink pattu/reshme saree, matched with antique red jewels... She was medium complexion and was very short compared to pavan...

    Arya was crying non stop, Sneha called a maid, to pick up Arya and followed her to feed Arya, that is when leena observed that sneha was limping.....

    Pavan was surrounded with friends.. Leena and Raju was waiting for an opportunity to talk to Pavan...

    Pavan got a call, he excused from the group, went near the window and took the call.. By the time he finished the call Raju and Leena reached him and introduced themselves...

    Hello am Leena... Private Detective... We were looking for an appointment to talk more about Priya murder... said leena..

    Whatttt priya's murder...... isnt it suicide... The case is closed 3 months back right.. Why enquiring now asked Pavan.

    Yes sir, case is closed by police... But Priya parents say, Priya is a bold girl she would never commit suicide.. So they have hired us to find out who is behind her murder said Raju..

    Haaaan... hmmm ok..... I am busy for couple of days.. I can meet you next week.. You can call me on this number Monday said Pavan handing over his visiting card with personal number...

    Sneha saw Pavan talking to a Raju and Leena.. And questioned herself " who are they??? I have never seen them... Why is pavan giving them personal visiting card, they dont look like business friends...Need to check with pavan later.."

    Leena thanked pavan and left the place....

    Sunil varma who was observing this came near Pavan and Enquired about leena and Raju....

    They were here to get appointment to discuss about priya case said Pavan..

    Priya who, the auditor who was working in our office right.. Isnt it suicide why enquiring now... Pavan dont meet this police, Detectives alone, but with our lawyer... said Sunil varma

    Pavan nodded okay and joined his business friends group....
     
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    Hi Suma, good one dear.... thank god you didn't add any new twist today.... otherwise i will be like :BangHead::BangHead::BangHead::BangHead::BangHead:
     
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    Hi

    Guess you missed the twist...

    Well its a hidden twist...

    You will know in later episodes
     
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    Do you mean about Pavan's wife... not sure i guessed right.
     
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    OMG!! Wonderful episode Suma dear :) Twist o twist!! Couldnt even guess who will be d murderer. Give us some clue :icon_pc::icon_pc::icon_pc: AMazing episode :) :clap2::clap2::clap2:
     
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    Still no clue.. :cry:
     
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    Suma dear again once nice episode. Sometimees twists follow slowly with the story.Lets see what happens.
     
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    It's coming up really well. I just found this thread and which made me to read all 6 episodes and waiting for the murderer... Good job Suma !
     
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    Yaa no clue, new new characters are getting introduced to add fuel to our thinking...:smash2::smash2::smash2:
    Good going...

    PS
     
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