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So Who Killed Her ???? Episode 3

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sumalynux, Apr 27, 2016.

  1. sumalynux

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    Leena got up and got ready by 9am... Ganga had prepared Dosa and Alu curry..Leena finished breakfast, coffee and took the file and went directly to her office..

    Raju had already come and was arranging files..

    Raju did you talk to priya colleague,owner and husband what time are they coming..

    Srinivas(colleague) and vinod(husband) said they will come evening after working hours.. Diwakar (house owner) said he will come around 11am..

    Hmmm, do one thing call up Diwakar and tell, we will be coming there in 1hr, he need not come here.. If we go to his complex, we might get more clues and get to talk to people in the complex.

    Raju called up and informed Diwakar.. In next 30mins they reached Diwakar's complex.

    It was similar to a apartment with 5 houses in building A and 5 more houses in adjacent building B.. Diwakar was staying in a duplex house behind these buildings.. There was a chair for watchman and next to watchman there was Dobhi(Iron person) who was ironing the clothes chatting with watchman..

    Raju and Leena walked to them.. Bhaisab(brother) there was a advertisement that there is a 2bhk vacant which building is that asked Raju....

    Oh is it for you?? Its in Building B... Said watchmen.
    They might have just walked 2 steps...


    Immediately ironman asked watchmen, oh is it for vinods house?

    Yes yes, vinod vacated immediately after priya ammas death, but police had ordered not to rent till case is closed.. Now its closed na, so Diwakar sir has given Ad, daily so many people are coming to see the house...

    Hearing this leena and Raju came back.. Raju said.....oh bhaisab there was death in the house?? Oh god if its suicide it will be haunted then.. I will be going out of station regularly its not safe to leave my sister alone in the house then.. said Raju..

    Arrey no sir, no suicide or haunted and all. It was murder case.. said watchmen.

    Oh ok then it should be fine.. btw was culprit caught??? Asked Raju..

    No sir, you know our police na, nobody caught and case closed said watchmen..

    Anna why do we need all that information, just ask if owner is good and neighborhood is good said Leena

    Madam everybody in this buildings are working people, all are very good... Nobody interferes in others matter.. Most of them leave house morning and come only evening.. And owner is also goood.

    Ironman laughed when watchmen said this..

    Watchmen stared at him, to shut his mouth...
    Sir, Go straight that cement colour building is B.
    Vacant house is in 2nd floor..And owner house is back of the building...

    Raju gave 100rs and said have tea, Thanks for information.. Watchmen took it saying, why all this.... he he he Thank you sir..

    Leena and Raju first went to building B..All houses were locked in 2nd floor and 1st floor... They saw one house was opened in ground floor... leena and raju went to that house...

    35yrs old lady was feeding her 5yr old son..
    Raju introduced they are private Detective and showed her identity card.. lady introduced herself as seetha working in an mnc, and was on leave today to take care of her son as he was not feeling well.

    Seetha can you tell me about Priya vinod and owner.. asked Leena..

    Honestly speaking i dono much about priya and vinod, most of people in this building are working and hardly see or talk to each other..I used to bump into her only when she comes to pick mails in mail box, or we happen to start office same time, and that time we just exchange smile..

    Hmmm, what about owner Diwakar.....

    He is ok, but he is a big flirt.. So i avoid talking to him and send rent with my husband.. since my office and my sons school is near by and all facilities is good in this house we are staying here from 3 years said seetha...

    Ohh ok... Where you at home day of Priya's murder, did Priya shout or something.. Did you see anyone
    Coming or going from Priya house.. asked leena.

    I come home at 8pm, and after that i will lock the house and get busy with cooking and helping my son do homework, my husband comes only at 10pm. So i wont know people going to 1st or 2nd floor... But that day my husband did come early and he said, he saw owner coming from Priya house when he was parking the bike... said seetha

    Oh did you inform this during policy investigation asked Leena..

    No madam, nobody Enquired us, they just enquired 2nd floor neighbors of priya house.. said seetha..

    Leena thanked her and Raju and leena went to Diwakar house..Diwakar welcomed them and asked them to sit.

    Leena looked around the house, it was a modern house with all luxuries... In 5mins around 40yrs old male got them juice...

    Leena purposely dropped the juice glass when maid tried giving her glass...

    Ohhhh m sorry mam, cant you see while giving shouted Diwakar..

    Maid stood there confused...

    Its ok, where is restroom let me wash said leena.

    Maid directed her to ground floor restroom.. Leena switched off the main knob purposely and said oh there is no water here...

    Oh sorry madam, you can use my restroom its in 1st floor said Diwakar...

    Leena went to restroom, washed her dress and looked around... she saw some magazine near sink.
    It was all adult magazines....

    Leena tried to look around his room for more clues, by then Diwakar came up and asked do you need towels madam???

    No no am done said leena and came down..

    Mr Diwakar now tell me about priya and vinod.

    Madam last week i already told what i knew to your assistant Raju.. Vinod has already vacated the house, case is closed.. So dont disturb me please.. Just because i let out the house for rent i cant be responsible for things happening in their house..

    I agree, but since Priya parents have opened the case and you were held as one of Suspect we have to Enquire you its our duty... can you please tell what happened on day of murder, when was last time you saw Priya alone...

    I saw Priya 1 week before her murder...
    Next day of her murder, vinod came early morning and said Priya is not opening door, we all came and helped him to get into house only to find Priya in pool of blood. We immediately informed police said Diwakar..

    Alright sir we will leave now, will contact you if we need any information said leena and left the house.

    Madam why did Diwakar hide that he met Priya previous night, and why dint you confront him asked Raju.

    Raju, i saw some adult magazine in his bathroom, seetha said he is a flirt, Ironman laughed when watchmen said hes good.. looks like he has some connection to Priya murder if i confront him he will become alert.. lets see where this goes... said leena.

     
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    Ohh..this looks like a good investigation case ..good going suma. Hope things are settled with you. Thanks for the story.
    PS
     
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    Wow Wonderful Suma dear! Felt like watching a movie!! Nail biting episode it was :)
     
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    what a smart officer Leena is, she has good skills of investigating. Diwakar clearly looks like the culprit but then Seetha could be wrong as she thinks him of flirt, may be she is trying to put him on spot. Let's see...wonderful narration. can't wait to see what happens next...
     
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    Thanks dear...

    Yeah running behind my 9months is never ending story... But since i have quit job and staying at moms place and no household work so its manageble.

    But need to join dh soon thats one worry on mind..
    Thanks for checking dear...
     
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    Oh thanks a lot meera.

    Feels good to know that my writing could get you a feel of watching movie..

    Thanks for motivation and support
     
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    @sumalynux

    Good startup n also the story is very interesting ... hope you are going to solve this case with so many twists with your frequent freequentttt updatees
     
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    Good going :) just 3 episodes and it has kindled more expectation. waiting for more dear
     
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    Thanks lata.

    Yes dear Leena is successful Detective.

    Once she starts interogating everyone will start looking culprit.. But no seetha dint lie, her husband did see Diwakar coming out of Priya house, and he is a flirt no doubt in that

    M trying my best write such a way it should be difficult to guess who would be culprit, lets see..
     

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