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Snowfall ***

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by sujani7, Jan 8, 2010.

  1. sujani7

    sujani7 New IL'ite

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    Hello everybody,

    This is my first post in IL.
    I decided to start off with a bit of poetry.
    Do post your thoughts on the poem :thumbsup

    Here it goes...

    Bright, light and sparkling white,
    I wondered if there was a much lovelier sight,

    Floating and dancing as they came,
    reminding everyone their favourite game.


    The children were out with all their vigour,
    building snowmen in all splendor.
    Soon one thing led to another
    It became a snowball fight no wonder !


    Could there be a more happier place ?
    I wish there were more of these snowy days.
    where the picture was perfect with the sunrays
    kissing the fallen snow as if to say,
    yesterday was mine as is today!


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  2. Sriniketan

    Sriniketan IL Hall of Fame

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    Welcome Sujani.
    :thumbsupto your first post..
    You had brought out the beauty of snowfall, which we enjoyed till last week..
    Keep writing!

    sriniketan
     

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